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Dfekt
Your mother wouldn't approve...
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From Me to Who?
#7879380 - 01/14/08 05:26 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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From Me to Who? ---------------
from lovers to strangers from heaven to hell from free as a bird to being locked in a cell
from concrete composure to falling apart from bursting with love to a hole in my heart
from all i could wish for to all that i had from calm & coherent to mindlessly mad
from tender affection to total despair and broken perfection beyond all repair
from pure adoration so true and intense to complete devastation of logic and sense
from staring and smiling and budding romance to sitting in silence avoiding my glance
from a kiss by the ocean with time standing still to life on my own with forever to kill
from the world in my arms as the sun fades away to waking alone and despising the day
from writer to reader my message is this: Venus is vicious but barters with bliss
sometimes the sweetness turns bitter and bad and tasting the truth is so sour and sad
the pain is persistant when passion has passed but seclusion surrenders and memories last
so prepare for the worst in pursuit of the best recapture the joy and abandon the rest
continue with caution whoever you are because arrows from Cupid leave permanent scars
and love without sadness will never exist but each precious moment is worth every risk.
-------------------- "Quotation is a serviceable substitute for wit." ~Oscar Wilde
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PhanTomCat
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Re: From Me to Who? [Re: Dfekt]
#7880866 - 01/14/08 10:44 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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Very nice..... The irony of duality....
>^;;^<
-------------------- I'll be your midnight French Fry.... "The most important things in life that are often ignored, are the things that one cannot see...." >^;;^<
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Sunny
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Re: From Me to Who? [Re: Dfekt]
#7881084 - 01/14/08 11:25 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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I liked it alot.
-------------------- WAFFLEZZ!!!11!!!1!!!1!!!!
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art
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Re: From Me to Who? [Re: Sunny]
#7881172 - 01/14/08 11:44 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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that was real good. I did not understand this part though
Quote:
Venus is vicious but barters with bliss
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Dfekt
Your mother wouldn't approve...
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Re: From Me to Who? [Re: art]
#7884210 - 01/15/08 04:00 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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i was trying to say that the goddess of love can be a very nasty character to deal with, but it is possible to negotiate with her and bring some true happiness into your life... or some shit like that :oP
It started out completely negative without such a copout happy conclusion but half way thru writing it i watched Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind lol... it influenced me to try and add a more positive slant on my writing as i tend to overindulge in the dark and depressive a bit too much. Example: here's one i wrote a few days before From Me to Who -
State of Mine -------------
run from today, hide from tomorrow a head full of demons a heart full of sorrow
ruins of love chewed to pieces and swallowed so filled with resentment yet totally hollow
fear & self-loathing dissolving my dreams with sinister whispers & deafening screams
my kindest intentions are viciously vexed each moment of madness surpassed by the next
chemical cravings caressing my thoughts relentlessly raging regrets & remorse
relinquish the peace i so desperately crave and smile through my teeth as i dig my own grave
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As you can see i haven't been having a great deal of fun lately
-------------------- "Quotation is a serviceable substitute for wit." ~Oscar Wilde
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PhanTomCat
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Re: From Me to Who? [Re: Dfekt]
#7884366 - 01/15/08 04:28 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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Quote:
MistaMiner said: As you can see i haven't been having a great deal of fun lately
But, it seems to be a great source of inspiration for you.... Keep up the good work....!
>^;;^<
-------------------- I'll be your midnight French Fry.... "The most important things in life that are often ignored, are the things that one cannot see...." >^;;^<
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