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Boots
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A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship'
#7821598 - 01/01/08 08:43 PM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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Cunt Worship
by Sebastian
Part 1
The slaves of the sorceress Licking at her wounds At the open gates to paradise Instead of tortured tombs
Where, in them, lay That black and grey Cold, majestic melody That held sway Over drear decay And plagued me Until this day...
In her scented gardens Their breath makes an awful hiss And in a moonlit waltz The slaves and the sorceress did kiss
They glide around the curve To the righteous hole And bound by the nerve Of her (un)holy soul They held, at the reigns, Her menstrual strains
And once the end had passed Slipping into a bondage mask She makes her will the rule And the slaves below will drool...
What evil did she spawn? A pentagram is drawn Across the face of humanity
Her name was screamed Across the universe and back What horrors did they dream Would happen when they signed the pact?
Part 2
The sorceress has become the slave To her wicked, headless mother Knowing that, in her grave, She soon will smother
Upon dark waters Where the leaves flurry 'round Held her breath when the slaughter Soiled and bloodied the ground
But no death came No, not for her Still, in the rain, Fate began to blur...
She walked those dark waters For most of her life But now her life totters On the edge of a knife
Fate holds the strings For her mother to cut "How could you betray me, You little slut?!"
Her flowers are wilted No more scent in her gardens The knife has just tilted But, from mother, no pardons
"This is your fate You overthrew me Now, watch the hate Gather in pools at your feet!"
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: Boots]
#7821830 - 01/01/08 09:47 PM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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This should be moved into OTD.
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: Sunny]
#7821994 - 01/01/08 10:50 PM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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Quote:
Sunny said:
This should be moved into OTD.
yea lol, i read that twice and saved it.
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Boots
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: SheerTerror]
#7830905 - 01/04/08 07:18 AM (16 years, 28 days ago) |
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What did you two think though? I wrote this when I was 16 and was hoping for some feedback.
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: Boots]
#7834348 - 01/05/08 01:39 AM (16 years, 28 days ago) |
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Well, it's a lot better than "Weird tales from the dark side" or whatever it was called but not as entertaining.
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: Boots]
#7835337 - 01/05/08 12:26 PM (16 years, 27 days ago) |
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It's a good read. My only criticism is that the title could be a little more clever than "Cunt Worship".
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: Boots]
#7836640 - 01/05/08 05:47 PM (16 years, 27 days ago) |
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It's clever as a comedic bit. But's not likely to be considered serious material.
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Boots
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: Sunny]
#7853705 - 01/09/08 01:38 PM (16 years, 23 days ago) |
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The title was really just a way to draw people in. I mean, sure, it ties into the poem itself but it's really a 'grab-and-point' method for me. Anyways, thanks for the input.
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