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Drewwyann
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Some psychedelic-influenced poetry.
#7806171 - 12/27/07 11:58 PM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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This beating heart, That you can hear, but not see, Five seconds ago was part of me, But that heart from the five seconds I told, Belongs to some one, Five seconds less old.
While I sit on down, I take in the world, Spinning, spinning, the great sphere twirled, But the time that is now, is not what was then, I find myself, in the same spot again.
I once had a friend, By the name of Tim, There were spots dancing on top of him, When I looked away to see the hands of time, I found that the spots, were the fault of mine.
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truffleupagus



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Re: Some psychedelic-influenced poetry. [Re: Drewwyann]
#7806191 - 12/28/07 12:04 AM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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I like it.
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Drewwyann
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Re: Some psychedelic-influenced poetry. [Re: truffleupagus]
#7806238 - 12/28/07 12:17 AM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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I noticed they all have to do with time...
I didn't do that on purpose. It just sort of happened.
The first one means, something along the lines of, I am not me from 5 seconds ago. We are different people. He is not me, even though we are more or less the same. The now self, is the actual me. me from the past, is some one else.
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AlCapwn
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Re: Some psychedelic-influenced poetry. [Re: Drewwyann]
#7806241 - 12/28/07 12:18 AM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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Indeed. It's fucking awesome. Man, drugs and poetry go so good together.
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Drewwyann
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Re: Some psychedelic-influenced poetry. [Re: AlCapwn]
#7806257 - 12/28/07 12:23 AM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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thanks man, it means a lot to me that you guys like it.
This is really the only way I can show my poetry to people without being too in their face about it. So this is really mostly all of the exposure it gets.
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truffleupagus



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Re: Some psychedelic-influenced poetry. [Re: Drewwyann]
#7806265 - 12/28/07 12:26 AM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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I was feeling like I had some creative juices flowing tonight too but you did a better job of utilizing yours.
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danlennon3
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Re: Some psychedelic-influenced poetry. [Re: truffleupagus]
#7806271 - 12/28/07 12:29 AM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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as I sit here broken hearted came here to shit but only farted Now I sit to scratch my balls and read the writing on the walls
-------------------- "Psychedelics should be used not to escape reality, but to embrace it"
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Drewwyann
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Re: Some psychedelic-influenced poetry. [Re: danlennon3]
#7806290 - 12/28/07 12:40 AM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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I am blood in the arm, I am skin on the chest, I am lungs for your breathe, Even in death.
(pertaining to my definition of god)
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MOTH
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Re: Some psychedelic-influenced poetry. [Re: Drewwyann]
#7806297 - 12/28/07 12:43 AM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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Quote:
Drewwyann said:
While I sit on down, I take in the world, Spinning, spinning, the great sphere twirled, But the time that is now, is not what was then, I find myself, in the same spot again.
Golden. Thanks for sharing. I always enjoy seeing psychedelic-inspired writings and artwork.
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Re: Some psychedelic-influenced poetry. [Re: MOTH]
#7806320 - 12/28/07 12:55 AM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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yeah its not bad, check this out lysergic bliss provided by god in the form of candy that the man brings to make you smile while sunlights drips down from heaven like acid rain that rots the souls of all who cry for help but have no where to go. wandering lost in the white snow follow the wind that blows you to me from the bottom of the sea into the stars infinitely beaming the message across the sky reflecting in those bottomless eyes
-------------------- I'm a traveler of both time and space...
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Re: Some psychedelic-influenced poetry. [Re: LedHead]
#7806357 - 12/28/07 01:12 AM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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The first one is amazing! The central theme of the poem is just great! I love it. Good job!
I need to try writing while under the influence, just to see what I come up with. =) Granted, I doubt it will be as eloquent or developed.
-------------------- Long you live and high you fly And smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry And all you touch and all you see Is all your life will ever be
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adrian7812
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Re: Some psychedelic-influenced poetry. [Re: LedHead]
#7806416 - 12/28/07 01:51 AM (16 years, 1 month ago) |
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LedHead said: yeah its not bad, check this out lysergic bliss provided by god in the form of candy that the man brings to make you smile while sunlights drips down from heaven like acid rain that rots the souls of all who cry for help but have no where to go. wandering lost in the white snow follow the wind that blows you to me from the bottom of the sea into the stars infinitely beaming the message across the sky reflecting in those bottomless eyes
Nice. Lysergic Bliss is my music production stage name I use... even though I aint that great or don't actually go on stage lol but ah who cares.
Walking through the valley, I hear a call a call for me and another for all I listen, and curl myself up into a ball and wait till the tunnel is once again a hall.
I don't know what the fuck I just wrote.
-------------------- Nothing I say is true. It is entirely fictional. In fact, my life is entirely fictional. I do not exist.
Edited by adrian7812 (12/28/07 01:54 AM)
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