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OfflineGill

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"Everything Was Fine"
    #7780460 - 12/20/07 05:15 AM (16 years, 1 month ago)

I just finished smoking a nice bowl and writing this rhyme. These hip-hop lyrics are my thoughts on the relationship my girlfriend just ended with me, even though "everything was fine". Commas used frequently to help me remember the beat for when it comes time to make a song out of this.
:stoned:

--
It's kinda hard with you not around, ever since you skipped town, I've been down and out.
I try to make it by the best I can, but with every plan, the changes make me recant,
the times, when I, had a chick like you by my side. Everything was fine, and I was feeling satisfied,
but now, I start to realize why I'm falling behind,
and why it seems my goals have all just fallen out of sight.

I'll miss you, yes it's true that I'll say that I'll move right on to, bigger,
and better things, like music and maybe making a dollar,
or two, but the fact remains that while I'm sitting here without you,
things will never be the same as they used to.

I remember when I first heard the news,
"There's a chance I that I might just be out of love with you."
I knew, not what to do but simply try to assure you,
that the things that I do, I do them all for you.

I know it's not a huge amount, but it's the thought that always counts,
and kindness by the ounce from me was always quite pronounced.
But despite how I feel, you went and turned on your heel,
you walked away from me and left me like some spit in your sink.

And I think, just what this has to say about me and what I believed in,
which was a love wasn't there to deceive me, but instead relieve the,
need I've had for company, and someone with whom I could take it easy,
so I could pack a bowl and take it nice and deeply,
breath out and live life with peacefully.
--

Any good?


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OfflineGill

Registered: 10/18/07
Posts: 511
Last seen: 5 years, 9 months
Re: "Everything Was Fine" [Re: Gill]
    #7780694 - 12/20/07 07:55 AM (16 years, 1 month ago)
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Alright. I put some time into making the beat for it. I've got a good WIP to show y'all. Enjoy. Feedback'd be nice if you have any.
:rockon:


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