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A poem i (started) to write...
    #7687559 - 11/27/07 06:32 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

Hey everybody,
I usually spend my time over in the cultivation forum, so i've never gotten a chance to hang out in this area. and I gotta say, its really cool to have a place to get opinions/critisisms on one's artwork/music/whatever. I usually don't share my stuff with other people, but I like the fact that I can get critisism without actually knowing any of you guys. pretty cool! :tongue2: So heres a poem I wrote not too long ago. Keep in mind its not anywhere finnished yet, just a start...

Once In A Blue Moon

Colorful stories the wiseman has told,
Tales about love and dispare,
Doors are now shutting, and paths have grown old,
under the sun's crimson glare,

The tops of the trees look like vermillion skies,
that only the birds get to see,
And under that blanket, a village will lye,
Which is where two crossed lovers will be,

They're seperated by bricks and by stone,
by taboos and other cliches,
rarely, they've entered another one's home,
Thus leaving their love colored grey,

Till, one starry night, the two hearts beat as one,
whilst under the phthalo blue moon,
he played her his song, the night had begun,
as she'd fallen in love with his tune,

And then on their way to the shimmering pools,
under the flouresent sky,
would they be lovers or would they be fools?,
Thats for Cupid's arrows to decide,

So there the two bathe, letting their souls be urged,
with Neptune's regards from the sea,
Never before his heart felt so submerged,
in the waters of his love to be,

so there ya go... thought I'd contribute a lil...


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Re: A poem i (started) to write... [Re: fungus fred]
    #7695614 - 11/29/07 04:49 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

thats some deep shit man :craven:


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Re: A poem i (started) to write... [Re: Phish_Dude]
    #7715843 - 12/04/07 02:55 PM (16 years, 1 month ago)

thats freaking amazing, buddy. you have some real talent:mushroom2:


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