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    #7655370 - 11/19/07 03:33 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

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My god... it's full of stars...


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Re: My TV Show is online [Re: StrandedVoyager]
    #7655399 - 11/19/07 03:41 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

Haven't watched it yet, but right off the bat, you need a fullscreen option on your player!


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Re: My TV Show is online [Re: circularvortex]
    #7655409 - 11/19/07 03:42 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

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Haven't watched it yet, but right off the bat, you need a fullscreen option on your player!




Cool this is the type of feedback I'm looking for. I'll get on it right now.


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Re: My TV Show is online [Re: StrandedVoyager]
    #7655464 - 11/19/07 03:53 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

well i made it to the Great White Hope segment. Im sorry but that segment wasn't funny at all, although maybe this isn't supposed to be a comedy show? I really don't know what you are going for


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Re: My TV Show is online [Re: TheCow]
    #7655499 - 11/19/07 04:00 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

I was just hoping to do something that would get me invited to sex and coke parties but if I have to go back to the drawing board that's cool. Thanks for your input.


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Re: My TV Show is online [Re: StrandedVoyager]
    #7655529 - 11/19/07 04:06 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

I, too, shut off the video before it reached it's end. I got to just before what I think is the last segment.

I think timing is very important. You had some funny things in there, but they were very drawn out. Your show is put together something like Monty Python, in format, expect that all of your transitions seem a bit too long, and one idea is stuck with a very long time. I think your scenes either need to be given more depth to justify their long play time, or need to be sped up a bit. It's a good start, but I think you need to look at how you structure the show.

And one more mechanical issue I had...the volume varies a lot...at times I had to turn my speakers up to hear something, and then the next scene would be ridiculously too loud for how high my speakers were. Granted, I have some very shitty speakers for this computer, but I think it would help to even out the volume level a bit.


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Under closer inspection I realised it was a funky ball of tits from outer space.



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Re: My TV Show is online [Re: circularvortex]
    #7655545 - 11/19/07 04:10 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

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I, too, shut off the video before it reached it's end. I got to just before what I think is the last segment.

I think timing is very important. You had some funny things in there, but they were very drawn out. Your show is put together something like Monty Python, in format, expect that all of your transitions seem a bit too long, and one idea is stuck with a very long time. I think your scenes either need to be given more depth to justify their long play time, or need to be sped up a bit. It's a good start, but I think you need to look at how you structure the show.

And one more mechanical issue I had...the volume varies a lot...at times I had to turn my speakers up to hear something, and then the next scene would be ridiculously too loud for how high my speakers were. Granted, I have some very shitty speakers for this computer, but I think it would help to even out the volume level a bit.




Cool thanks, you're completely right the show is extremely rough right now. We put this out just to see what the format would be like and to see the response to that would be. I totally admit the material isn't where it should be and the post should be better but I thank you for the few positives you saw in it. As Bill Hicks said funny material and laughter will be dubbed in later.


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Re: My TV Show is online [Re: StrandedVoyager]
    #7655577 - 11/19/07 04:16 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

I wasn't feeling it either man. It was pretty awkward. But hey, we all have our humble beginnings. Remember him? Now he is a movie star:



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