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Poem: Carrots
    #7642874 - 11/16/07 02:47 AM (16 years, 2 months ago)

I started out writing a poem about love and yes, and all kinds of other bizarre abstracts,but ultimately; I became attached to a short dialogue between my friend and I about the carrots rooting in the lower shelf of their refrigerator.

carrots
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"The carrots
in the fridge are growing;..."
There is
a short pause.
"You should plant them."


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Re: Poem: Carrots [Re: Sunny]
    #7643670 - 11/16/07 10:54 AM (16 years, 2 months ago)

That... that's amazing...

:sun:


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Re: Poem: Carrots [Re: Sunny]
    #7643677 - 11/16/07 10:56 AM (16 years, 2 months ago)

I am inspired.


Potato
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Potato, in the fridge
A cold blast. Chill!
I see a speck of mud
Lights out
I see you're still as big a slut as when we first met. Fucking bitch.


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Re: Poem: Carrots [Re: Sunny]
    #7643772 - 11/16/07 11:27 AM (16 years, 2 months ago)

A regular Whitman you are


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Re: Poem: Carrots [Re: Hyper_Panda_GO]
    #7643780 - 11/16/07 11:30 AM (16 years, 2 months ago)

Sunny and I are one day going to storm the streets of NYC with our groundbreaking beats and poetry recitals.


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Re: Poem: Carrots [Re: Thin White Duke]
    #7643816 - 11/16/07 11:45 AM (16 years, 2 months ago)

Call me when you do, I'll be the guy who beats the drums


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Re: Poem: Carrots [Re: Hyper_Panda_GO]
    #7644011 - 11/16/07 12:36 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

mabey you should clean out your fridge...


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Re: Poem: Carrots [Re: Thin White Duke]
    #7644043 - 11/16/07 12:45 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

:sunny:  :smoking:


I like your last line the best. Such a delicious non-sequitor.


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Re: Poem: Carrots [Re: Sunny]
    #7644102 - 11/16/07 12:58 PM (16 years, 2 months ago)

I will be the next Allen Ginsberg.


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