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notapillow
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some lyrics i just spewed out (edit DONE)
#7630374 - 11/13/07 12:53 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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not done but i just spewed out this litte refrainy chorus thing what youthink
"ROT"
cruising through bruising blue under the leaves, but over the truth
hooray! decay! ill pay ill pray
Ill stay! ill play!
i just need to rot today...
sitting still, bended will love for live, but lust to kill
take me home shake my bones under the leaves i hear the tone
HOORAY! DECAY! ill pay ill pray
its fight or flight
i just need to rot tonight."
so what you think. kinda quick but i like it. now it just needs a psilocybin dredging groove
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Edited by notapillow (11/13/07 01:08 PM)
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Re: some lyrics i just spewed out [Re: notapillow]
#7630385 - 11/13/07 12:56 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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it sure does remind me of spew
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Re: some lyrics i just spewed out [Re: wps]
#7630396 - 11/13/07 12:58 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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spew?
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Re: some lyrics i just spewed out [Re: notapillow]
#7630408 - 11/13/07 01:00 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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smells like spew alright
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this is meant to be played at an outdoor festival with a jam band, right?
cause I can TOTALLY picture these lyrics in that setting!
I'll bet there's a banjo involved somehow.....
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i like spew... and i like you too!!!
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its ment to be played by me. but yeah, i liek banjoes. and i liek playing outdoors and i love to JAM!
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Re: some lyrics i just spewed out [Re: notapillow]
#7630477 - 11/13/07 01:13 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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dont hate me though
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Re: some lyrics i just spewed out [Re: BIGSWANG]
#7630490 - 11/13/07 01:15 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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thumbs down but i couldn't do any better..lol!
also who thinks of tripping as rotting? lol
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Re: some lyrics i just spewed out [Re: BIGSWANG]
#7630495 - 11/13/07 01:15 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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no hate involved. just wanna see what people think  im making this song either way
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Quote:
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also who thinks of tripping as rotting? lol
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Re: some lyrics i just spewed out [Re: notapillow]
#7630507 - 11/13/07 01:16 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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Wow, in case anybody else misinterpreted that...
JAM SUCKS
METAL RULEZ
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i jam metel. so yeeeaeah do i rule at sucking???
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Re: some lyrics i just spewed out [Re: notapillow]
#7630526 - 11/13/07 01:19 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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you do. you do rule at sucking.
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ok then as long as we are clear
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Re: some lyrics i just spewed out [Re: notapillow]
#7630597 - 11/13/07 01:29 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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lol that was really funny how you walked into that burn.
in all seriousness, don't listen to what people say about lyrics. all lyrics sound totally retarded until they have a musical frame of reference.
my objections to these lyrics is that they don't really seem to be saying much..... and therefore, in my estimation, would be played at a jam fest populated by jerry garcia drones that smelled like the cow shit they just got through raiding.
So that's sort of person-specific criticism. Sorry. My tastes are my own. But I'm sure they'd sound great to the legions of hippies the grateful dead left behind.
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Re: some lyrics i just spewed out [Re: notapillow]
#7630598 - 11/13/07 01:29 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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I like it, Notapillow!
I'd actually use it, and sing it (as I think I suck at writing song lyrics)I'm better at rapping
Perhaps you and I could be the best (if not the first) pyschedelic hip-hop like group?;-)
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Re: some lyrics i just spewed out [Re: Apollyphelion]
#7630621 - 11/13/07 01:33 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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ever heard of trip hop?
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No. And I never want to. LOL
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Re: some lyrics i just spewed out [Re: notapillow]
#7630624 - 11/13/07 01:34 PM (16 years, 2 months ago) |
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Quote:
notapillow said:
Quote:
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also who thinks of tripping as rotting? lol
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Why?
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