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Poem: Stranger in the Desert
    #7580413 - 10/31/07 11:48 AM (16 years, 3 months ago)

This is something I wrote a month or two ago. Just looking for feedback.

Stranger in the Desert
-Philip Pierce-

What brings you here, oh stranger
Such that pulls me to ponder
All the sights you may have seen
But I, the sand, cannot speak

All those who love sunlight
They would not love this hell
And these steps blend to the next
You know not how long it's been

Stranger in the Desert
Cursed now to wander
Ever subject to this feeling
Upon the sky, say no more dreams

Not a bad way to escape
The past, in all its deep dread
Clashing blades with those you love
In wake, much greater nightmares

Through this drifting, strength will build
New courage, fight for beliefs
Nigh, are the ghosts from before
Stalking even under sun

Stranger in the Desert
Set only now to wonder
Strangled yet freed by this feeling
Up to the sky, dare not to dream

Another shadow leaps again
Every foe replaced again
Sword striketh shield once again
Death is bound to you again

Stranger in the Desert
Legs so weak, mind comes so numb
Fight on, with passion burning strong
Someday, may you find your enemy


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Re: Poem: Stranger in the Desert [Re: Tsion]
    #7581675 - 10/31/07 05:18 PM (16 years, 3 months ago)

I like the imagery you create with the desert theme. cool poem.


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Re: Poem: Stranger in the Desert [Re: Tsion]
    #7581696 - 10/31/07 05:29 PM (16 years, 3 months ago)

It's very visual. :yesnod:


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