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a few new songs that i've made!
    #7539387 - 10/20/07 01:48 PM (16 years, 3 months ago)

they are at these 2 locations:

1. http://www.soundclick.com/copyyridolshttp://www.soundclick.com/copyyridols

2. http://www.soundclick.com/aquileiahttp://www.soundclick.com/aquileia

#1 is my breakbeat electronic experimental musical project. you guys are probably fairly familiar with this, because i've posted here about this before. i have a new single, and a few new songs.

#2 is a solo-single project. i made that song a long time ago, and i had no project that it would fit in (all my other music was very much different) so it was kind of just in a state of independence. so i made it a project - aquileia. it's one song, and one song only, and thats the end of it.

tell me what you think of this!

1. if you like it or not
2. what you really like about it
3. what you don't like about it
4. what you think i can really work on
5. mistakes that you think i've made
6. in what direction should i head with my music?

thank you all, family.


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Re: a few new songs that i've made! [Re: lysergicide]
    #7539890 - 10/20/07 04:25 PM (16 years, 3 months ago)

I don't have an answer to all of those questions, but I will say what I can:

I listened to three of the Copy Yr Idols tracks. I like your dirty synths, sounds good. For "breakbeat", the drums don't seem to be doing quite enough breaking. All the chords and atmospherics make it sound very theatrical - something that can be both good and bad. "Soundtrack" music. Seems like it needs to be explaining something.. has a bit of trouble standing on its own. People used to say that about a lot of my electronica, too (and they probably still do). Solid hooks will take that "problem" away.

With all that said, I don't like the song titles "First Orgasm" and "If Only I Were In You". I didn't hear an audio orgasm at all. That track sounded more like an existential detective movie.

Overall, I do like it. There's a lot of potential there, and you clearly know your way around the programs you're using to write this stuff.
As for direction, I'd say work on adding real emotion. It sounds like that's what you're going for now, but something seems to be missing. It sounds distant, robotic.

I hope that helps. =]


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Re: a few new songs that i've made! [Re: lukeboots]
    #7540780 - 10/20/07 08:47 PM (16 years, 3 months ago)

i appreciate your post, and i appreciate your challenge for me to do better. even if i like my ownd music and disagree with some of the things you stated, you inspire me to try harder! thank you, your opinion is very valuable to me


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