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OfflineSyle
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**Floor 6 (When American Changed)**
    #7467925 - 09/29/07 06:13 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)
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My band and I are in the midst of recording our first EP, and this is the first track that we have completed  :smile: This song is a part 1 of 2 songs.

Just looking for some feedback! Cheers!

And if you don't want to download the file, here is our imusicscene page for that song: http://www.imusicscene.com/brahma/audio.php?p=3

EDIT: here are the lyrics.
Early in the morning.
Light was shining brightly.
There were bodies everywhere.
I was out of sight,
but they weren't out of sight.

Boom goes the gun,
boom goes the gun,
boom goes the gun.

Early in the morning.
Light was shining brightly.
There were bodies everywhere.
I was out of sight,
but they weren't out of sight.

Boom. Boom. Boom. Boom.
Boom. Boom. Boom.


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Edited by Syle (09/29/07 06:14 PM)


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: Syle]
    #7467940 - 09/29/07 06:19 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

Ha that was so bad


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: Syle]
    #7467948 - 09/29/07 06:21 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

I like it. Too short though. 2:21 seems like just a tease. Good engineering and good sound. Nice drums.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: LucidDream]
    #7468055 - 09/29/07 07:08 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

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LucidDream said:
I like it. Too short though. 2:21 seems like just a tease. Good engineering and good sound. Nice drums.




yeah, it's only part 1 of 2 songs. thanks for the kind words about the engineering, this is home recording and i am the one doing most of the mixing so, it means a lot to me to hear that, thanks.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: Syle]
    #7468071 - 09/29/07 07:17 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

I sense maybe a little bit of a tool influence? cool shit.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: ThePeruvianTorch]
    #7468079 - 09/29/07 07:19 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

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I sense maybe a little bit of a tool influence? cool shit.



i am guessing you're being a bit sarcastic?  :smile: yeah, got a lot of tool in us.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: Syle]
    #7468285 - 09/29/07 08:22 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

You need to work on your lyrics big time.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: WakeboardrB]
    #7468287 - 09/29/07 08:23 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

it's about the JFK assassination.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: Syle]
    #7468294 - 09/29/07 08:26 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

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LucidDream said:
I like it. Too short though. 2:21 seems like just a tease. Good engineering and good sound. Nice drums.




yeah, it's only part 1 of 2 songs. thanks for the kind words about the engineering, this is home recording and i am the one doing most of the mixing so, it means a lot to me to hear that, thanks.




By the way, can you recommend any good books on sound engineering? I'm working on some home stuff, but I don't have my technical shit down and need to do some studying. Keep up the good work, man.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: LucidDream]
    #7468316 - 09/29/07 08:32 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

i am self taught, not sure of any good books or online sources...? I frequent harmony central quite a bit and just ask questions there when my sanity is on the verge of collapsing. sorry i can't bve of more help.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: Syle]
    #7468343 - 09/29/07 08:40 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

That's pretty damn good. I can taste the Tool in there. Among other influences. But the lyrics could use more lyrics, and maybe a few alterations. You should set up the structure of the song so that it's intro-> verse-> refrain-> verse-> bridge-> outro and what not. Like 80% of songs follow that structure and it would make it longer. Or do what ever you want. Just a bit of constructive criticism. I really like it though.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: LucidDream]
    #7468590 - 09/29/07 09:55 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

search kvr for engeneering/mixing, you'll find shitloads.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: UlcerPentacidis]
    #7468714 - 09/29/07 10:45 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

I don't really see anything in the lyrics that would make me think of the JFK assassination.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: Lily_Morgan]
    #7468725 - 09/29/07 10:52 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

and that's fine. but did you listen to it?


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: Syle]
    #7468730 - 09/29/07 10:55 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

Thats really good man, youve got some talent there.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: UlcerPentacidis]
    #7468733 - 09/29/07 10:58 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

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search kvr for engeneering/mixing, you'll find shitloads.




That's the problem. There's hundreds of books on the subject. I want like the audio engineer's bible, some reference that has it all.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: LucidDream]
    #7468741 - 09/29/07 11:02 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

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UlcerPentacidis said:
search kvr for engeneering/mixing, you'll find shitloads.




That's the problem. There's hundreds of books on the subject. I want like the audio engineer's bible, some reference that has it all.




i really don't think you can go wrong with trial and error. and then for the really tough tough stuff, you can ask questions to experts like on harmony central.com.

here check otu this thread, it has tons of studio "secrets": http://acapella.harmony-central.com/showthread.php?t=459652

i learned a ton of stuff just reading through that thread.


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Re: **Floor 6 (When American Changed)** [Re: Acyl]
    #7470189 - 09/30/07 12:02 PM (16 years, 4 months ago)

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Thats really good man, youve got some talent there.




thanks Acyl, we appreciate the kind words! we'll be posting up more once we master the rest of the songs. should be around 8 or 9 tracks total.


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