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OfflineHakim0777
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poem rap thingy
    #7289581 - 08/12/07 11:35 PM (16 years, 6 months ago)

I wrote a rap poem thing, my first one id like your guyses opinions for improvement.

Two days ago, I shaved my head for no apparent reason,
Now I know it was my subconscious Bleedin,

My guilt aint fleetin
Cause even if I was thizzed I still committed treason.

Cause I see the patterns,
I always know what comes next

I may have helped build them a tower
But its made of neglect

Tell me all your secrets you fears and your pain
So I can systematically turn counterclockwise the gears in your brain

Its unintentional,
When I was young it was fun

now All I want is to get sensual,
With a gun.

Sometimes I feel my condition isn't malignant,
I left my walls buried in retention like some dead descendant
And Built a house above it amiably reflecting my new commitment

They say love and hate are two languages understood by all people
I live the latter I wish I was billengual

Im a bear its ether flight or mastication
It aint winter but I feel like hibernatin

And I feel kinda Plastic,
Im a sexual Spastic
Trying to communicate through this pile of rapshit

Oshit there I go again,
I got a lap dance from someone who pretends to be a gem

And you know I may have rubbed her clit and kissed her neck,
But when I reflect shes just ATM with tits who takes checks

Tired and Wired I decide to share the story
Of my dancer for hire and with that it was ended
Before it could transcend into that fire

I know Im only 18,
To young to know weather shes the girl of my dreams,
Shes says turn the page boy your slates been cleaned

She has an energy unique and bright
Even in two she shows 3 dimensional life

Sometimes I forget words cut sharper than knives

And Im feelin Kinda sick,
Im hopin itll pass

My brains sayin "lay bricks"
And architect the past

And I know that idea may be bad,
A little bit sad,

But Its much easier livin like my dad.

The idea that one comment would make her ignore feelings,
Made no sense in my brain.

But then I realized theres nothing to ignore,
when its been drained.

And now All I Feel is plight and pain,
Theres not a cloud in sight but Im drownin in the rain.


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OfflineIron_Hymen
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Re: poem rap thingy [Re: Hakim0777]
    #7291323 - 08/13/07 03:07 PM (16 years, 6 months ago)

this should all go to your 'wall themed' poems


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