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Colonel Kurtz Ph.D
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Hey guys, would you rate my playing?
#7086458 - 06/24/07 08:59 AM (16 years, 7 months ago) |
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Here's the almost finished first cut from my soon-to-be first album, Kriya.
I'd like to have some input about my guitar playing if you guys feel like it. I played all instruments in there but I really only care about guitar 
Criticisms, advice? Everything is more than welcome
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AroundtheSon
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I rate it excellent - thought I was listening to Pink Floyd for a minute.
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ShroomMan420
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Re: Hey guys, would you rate my playing? [Re: AroundtheSon]
#7086486 - 06/24/07 09:14 AM (16 years, 7 months ago) |
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AroundtheSon said:
I rate it excellent - thought I was listening to Pink Floyd for a minute.
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fireworks_god
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Re: Hey guys, would you rate my playing? [Re: ShroomMan420]
#7086778 - 06/24/07 10:48 AM (16 years, 7 months ago) |
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Yes, overall that was pretty sweet. Not much of a critique to hand it. 
The only thing is that maybe it sounds too much like Pink Floyd? 
Oh, and that bass fill could have been better, at like 1:05. Actually, the bass in that whole little part seems a little off.
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Ythan
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Wow, awesome! I knew you were talented but I didn't realize you could actually channel David Gilmour. Put me down for a signed copy of your album.
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stefan
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it sounds very nice! (not just the guitar, but the whole mix):D
personally I think that you need to find your own style in stead of (wanting to) sound like pink floyd. that would be the icing on the cake
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Colonel Kurtz Ph.D
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Re: Hey guys, would you rate my playing? [Re: stefan]
#7087763 - 06/24/07 03:33 PM (16 years, 7 months ago) |
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I'm on it mang, I'm on it, that song is 1 year old anyway... It's on rotation in a few radio stations in the Canary Islands too 
I just uploaded another solo in which I believe my style has evolved since Kriya. I must apologize for the bad quality tho, it's a re-encode from some samples I recorded for a friend.
Thanks for the kind words everyone! I really appreciate them 
Ythan: You can count on it man
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Spooge
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Nice work man! 
Very gilmourish
I need to start learning the keyboard/piano so I can try and put together pieces such as that.
I liked the guitar though man. Great stuff
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WScott
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Re: Hey guys, would you rate my playing? [Re: Spooge]
#7091129 - 06/25/07 02:44 PM (16 years, 7 months ago) |
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Wow if I didn't download it myself I would probably have just assumed it was some unreleased Pink Floyd. Great stuff, very Gilmour and just for a second or two at the end I thought I could hear some Hendrix too, .
At 1:33 to 1:39, it kind of reminded me of wind chimes. I think it would be pretty neat to go for more of that sound at the end, dubbed with more of the waves crashing.. in my head sounds like a sick way to close it out.
Sweet job.
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