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A beautiful poem....
    #5836076 - 07/08/06 05:06 PM (17 years, 6 months ago)

It was a lovely, sunny evening in England. It's been hotter here than I can ever remember. The sun was setting and I was walking to the video store to pick up a Jodie Foster film, a pack of super expensive Jelly Beans (they come in flavours that you'd expect a hippy's clothes to taste of after a major hippyfest, kick ass!) and some strawberry cheesecake Hargendas.

At the bottom of my road is a very, very big girls' school. What's this my eye catches, but a poem, cast aside on the pavement, written in the hand of a fair and pure maiden of this noble college. And so I will quote, verbatim, her words in this fine work such that you may appreciate it's splendor...

simply titled "Bastard Fuckhead Control Freak", perhaps an introspective look at the hierarchical family structure of modern western culture?


Sick of always acting how you tell me to
Tired of speaking what you want me to
Because this isn't me, it's always you
I want out! Now I'm through

You tell me where to go
You tell me how to be
With all the shit you put me through
I hate you so fucking much
(Edit: nice, but there's better to come)
Just let me free

I'm done with this
You've ruined my life
My heart is covered in piss
(Edit: my favourite bit)
You're lucky I didn't have a knife!

You ban me from going out
You stop me having fun.
You yell at me about
Shit you don't want me to know
You're so lucky I don't have a gun.

You tell me where to go
You tell me how to be
With all the shit you put me through
I hate you so fucking much
Just let me free

I'm done with this
You've ruined my life

My heart is covered in piss
Your
(edit: such good spelling & punctuation up until now) lucky I don't have a knife.

I think we all have something we can take away from that. I took away her poem, which she'll probably be looking for come Monday morning.


Edited by johnuk (07/08/06 05:33 PM)


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Re: A beautiful poem.... [Re: johnuk]
    #5836167 - 07/08/06 05:26 PM (17 years, 6 months ago)

:rotfl:
I'd hate to be the object of her scorn! :grin:


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You invented the wheel....You push the motherfucker!!


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