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ScarletFox
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Since others have posted their writing... *DELETED*
#5829386 - 07/06/06 08:57 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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Post deleted by ScarletFoxReason for deletion: moving
-------------------- "I will only complicate you - trust in me and fall as well." - TOOL
Edited by ScarletFox (07/06/06 09:08 PM)
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HELLA_TIGHT
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: ScarletFox]
#5829413 - 07/06/06 09:03 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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Did you walk in on a boyfriend jerking off to some porn?
OUCH.
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ScarletFox
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
#5829416 - 07/06/06 09:04 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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no
-------------------- "I will only complicate you - trust in me and fall as well." - TOOL
Edited by ScarletFox (07/06/06 09:34 PM)
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Penguarky Tunguin
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: ScarletFox]
#5829424 - 07/06/06 09:05 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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I've never understood that.
When I have a steady supple of the pewn I rarely look at porn and the girl is having to fight me off...
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HELLA_TIGHT
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: ScarletFox]
#5829430 - 07/06/06 09:06 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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What a weirdo.
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ScarletFox
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-------------------- "I will only complicate you - trust in me and fall as well." - TOOL
Edited by ScarletFox (07/06/06 09:34 PM)
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eligal
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: ScarletFox]
#5829446 - 07/06/06 09:09 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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Believe us pubbers when we tell you, we will look at you 
ps: To all these people putting their poetry n stuff in the pub, its cool n all but there is a forum for arts literature and music.  Incase some didnt know that...
-------------------- \m/ Spanksta \m/ "do you have the freedom to do with your nervous system what you want?" "MolokoMilkPlus said: I'll respect you if you let me give you a blow job" "tactik said: respect the can."
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ScarletFox
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: eligal]
#5829448 - 07/06/06 09:10 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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ok I didn't know that. I actually think I'll delete this post anyways
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eligal
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: ScarletFox]
#5829464 - 07/06/06 09:13 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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you dont have to delete it...
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ScarletFox
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: eligal]
#5829468 - 07/06/06 09:15 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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meh, all people wanted to talk about was porn, LOL. It's okay.
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Osker246
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: ScarletFox]
#5829506 - 07/06/06 09:24 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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I dont even know whats going on. Im seeing post about poetry and post about a boyfriends addiction to porn. I must know whats going on...
See what happens when you delete things? You confuse me.
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debianlinux
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: ScarletFox]
#5829509 - 07/06/06 09:24 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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i can't imagine all the folks on the internet talking about the poem that deals with the most popular aspect of the internet. not to mention that poem had the most sincere emotional imagery and was the most relevant to the audience. there was no doubt what it was about.
criticise the critics, i suppose.
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HELLA_TIGHT
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: debianlinux]
#5829537 - 07/06/06 09:30 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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I liked the "meat in hand" phrase.
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ScarletFox
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: debianlinux]
#5829542 - 07/06/06 09:32 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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Quote:
debianlinux said: i can't imagine all the folks on the internet talking about the poem that deals with the most popular aspect of the internet. not to mention that poem had the most sincere emotional imagery and was the most relevant to the audience. there was no doubt what it was about.
criticise the critics, i suppose.
Well I don't think I was completely comfortable putting it out there in the first place. My mistake I guess.
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
#5829552 - 07/06/06 09:33 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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Quote:
HELLA_TIGHT said: I liked the "meat in hand" phrase.
Thank you, it was something like that, yes. LOL
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debianlinux
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: ScarletFox]
#5829569 - 07/06/06 09:37 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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yz. it's all good, tho. that's what this place runs on. letting it all hang out. there's been a million times i've regretted some of things i've let loose and believe me, they make your poems look like cereal box games. it's what keeps me here, in fact. this place is more than a forum to those of us who stick around. i didn't see anybody judging you or even saying anything directly about you. i was impressed not only with the poetry but your willingness to share it.
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debianlinux
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
#5829577 - 07/06/06 09:40 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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i liked the "gathering dust" bit. that really captures the forlorn forsakeness that must have been felt.
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Hyper_Panda_GO
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... *DELETED* [Re: ScarletFox]
#5829741 - 07/06/06 10:21 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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Here's a poem about sexual frustration and stuff
The Glare
Look at him look at me Full of malice and deadly throes Of what he’ll do underneath my clothes My flesh can only set him free
Look at him look at you With unbridled jealousy and burning pain From which the wasted sea men rain Upon the wings from when they flew
Look at him look at her The one he burns with radiant eyes And turns a deaf ear to her lifeless cries As he skins her midnight fur
Look at him look at him With guts and glory that sing masculine song All of which are physically wrong When the scissors decide to trim
Look at him look at it The lips are thrown into a smile Befitting of a crocodile As his tongue begins the lick
Look at him look at himself The mirror is his only friend But even glass cannot pretend The flesh beyond does not need help
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HELLA_TIGHT
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... *DELETED* [Re: Hyper_Panda_GO]
#5829758 - 07/06/06 10:25 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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I'll show you some sea men rain.
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... *DELETED* [Re: Hyper_Panda_GO]
#5829763 - 07/06/06 10:26 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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Wait, are you a female?
If so, disregard my last post.
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... *DELETED* [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
#5829769 - 07/06/06 10:28 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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I'm mail...heh, I'm funny
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... *DELETED* [Re: Hyper_Panda_GO]
#5829792 - 07/06/06 10:32 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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Quote:
Hyper_Panda_GO said: I'm mail...heh, I'm funny
Don't quit yer day job just yet
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Re: Since others have posted their writing... *DELETED* [Re: drtyfrnk]
#5830154 - 07/07/06 12:15 AM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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I hate how I have to depend on Taco Bell until I can move on to...something bigger, but until then, free Baja Chicken Chalupas
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