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OfflineJacquesCousteau
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More poetry... yarrrrr!
    #5682845 - 05/28/06 09:06 AM (17 years, 8 months ago)

This just kind of popped out after reading some other poetry on here...

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Straight onto the money maker,
heart is beating quick.
These rips in time release my shine,
and let me go within.

I set my pace and try to shake her;
try will not buy time.
Tries are lies and my disguise.
Her binds are much too tight.

Below I see the valley forms;
above me, miles to climb.
Her ties are tangled; pray for angels.
Time to cut the line.

But something in my alter falters;
strain to make it right...
My engine burns, and I return;
another dim-lit night.

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edit: updated with new version, revised phrasing and some other changes...


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Re: More poetry... yarrrrr! [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #5685145 - 05/28/06 11:38 PM (17 years, 8 months ago)

Lots of poetry popping up around here....

I like the lyrical style your working with. The words sing.


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"And we, inhabitants of the great coral of the Cosmos, believe the atom (which still we cannot see) to be full matter, whereas, it too, like everything else, is but an embroidery of voids in the Void, and we give the name of being, dense and even eternal, to that dance of inconsistencies, that infinite extension that is identified with absolute Nothingness and that spins from its own non-being the illusion of everything."


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