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OfflineTelepylus
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weathered & worn
    #5678584 - 05/26/06 09:42 PM (17 years, 8 months ago)

an old leather coat
stuffed with straw
hanging upon the cross
weathered & worn
i'll keep the crows from your corn


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InvisibleDirtMcgirt
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Re: weathered & worn [Re: Telepylus]
    #5680681 - 05/27/06 02:58 PM (17 years, 8 months ago)

nice...


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"And we, inhabitants of the great coral of the Cosmos, believe the atom (which still we cannot see) to be full matter, whereas, it too, like everything else, is but an embroidery of voids in the Void, and we give the name of being, dense and even eternal, to that dance of inconsistencies, that infinite extension that is identified with absolute Nothingness and that spins from its own non-being the illusion of everything."


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OfflineTelepylus
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Re: weathered & worn [Re: DirtMcgirt]
    #5680731 - 05/27/06 03:24 PM (17 years, 8 months ago)

thanks.

i love when people read my poetry.


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InvisibleDirtMcgirt
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Re: weathered & worn [Re: Telepylus]
    #5682670 - 05/28/06 06:45 AM (17 years, 8 months ago)

No prob. Keep at it. There is wit in that poem and it doesn't rely on endrhymes. IMHO, that's a good thing.

Poetry that is nothing but a rhyming scheme is lame and went out of style in the 1700s and/or the 4th grade. (this rant has nothing to do with you, but, I get frustrated b/c that is all I see around here)

It is nice to read something different...don't stop


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"And we, inhabitants of the great coral of the Cosmos, believe the atom (which still we cannot see) to be full matter, whereas, it too, like everything else, is but an embroidery of voids in the Void, and we give the name of being, dense and even eternal, to that dance of inconsistencies, that infinite extension that is identified with absolute Nothingness and that spins from its own non-being the illusion of everything."


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OfflineJacquesCousteau
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Re: weathered & worn [Re: Telepylus]
    #5682808 - 05/28/06 08:37 AM (17 years, 8 months ago)

I like that. :smile: Keep it up man...


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