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Going Back - a short poem
    #5586130 - 05/03/06 02:55 PM (17 years, 8 months ago)

heres a little poem I wrote while at work. Haven't seen a lot of poems here, figured more people here would be writing them...


Going Back

it came from one,
this soul you retain
you are like a son
living in this plane

nothing is asked of you
but kindness and love
understand and go through
this comes from above

there was no beginning,
it will never end,
this constant spinning
a messege it will send

of hope and caring
if only you would change
so many could be sharing
is it so strange?

we're not here to worship
we're not here to praise
its not about giving thanks
its about changing your ways

when your life's second is over
is it really done?
it depends how you lived,
hope you had fun

shattered into pieces,
these thoughts out of control,
pushed back into the creases,
that the darkness has stole

back into the one,
where it all began,
let it all be done,
the final plan


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One does not become enlightened by imagining figures of light, but by making the dark conscious.
--Jung


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Re: Going Back - a short poem [Re: j_db69]
    #5586894 - 05/03/06 05:49 PM (17 years, 8 months ago)

i like i like!
i specially like the flow of it, rhythm or whatever.

and there are a few poems here but not as many as there should be...


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