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InvisibleCorporal Kielbasa

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my eyes are dull and dusty
    #5531461 - 04/18/06 10:07 PM (17 years, 9 months ago)

hazed by the millions of blank faces,
never looking or blinking,
never seeing you for you
These eyes have seen buildings rise
and countries fall,
There once was a world so vivid so serreal
but lies and cries and menelevence
draw me further away further in,
then something cought my eye
it tought me how to look and see,
but all the while it was all infront of me.
It made me look it made me smile it made my grin about a qaurter mile
so stop with the denile realise that the things you see are all crystalizationes of the state of the innerself.


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Re: my eyes are dull and dusty [Re: Corporal Kielbasa]
    #5531532 - 04/18/06 10:26 PM (17 years, 9 months ago)

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InvisibleCorporal Kielbasa

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Re: my eyes are dull and dusty [Re: SneezingPenis]
    #5531562 - 04/18/06 10:33 PM (17 years, 9 months ago)

Cair to elaborate?

i couldn't give a rats ass actualy never mind....


Edited by Corporal Kielbasa (04/18/06 10:34 PM)


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Re: my eyes are dull and dusty [Re: Corporal Kielbasa]
    #5531609 - 04/18/06 10:47 PM (17 years, 9 months ago)

oh, Im sorry, I didnt realize only positive feedback was allowed. You and your poetry career should go far with that insecurity. Let me know how it works out for you!


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Re: my eyes are dull and dusty [Re: SneezingPenis]
    #5531642 - 04/18/06 10:52 PM (17 years, 9 months ago)

Im really not trying to be an asshole. Sometimes, it just seems that way, but honestly, what does "menelevence" mean?

Maybe my lexicon has yet to grasp it.


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InvisibleCorporal Kielbasa

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Re: my eyes are dull and dusty [Re: SneezingPenis]
    #5531653 - 04/18/06 10:53 PM (17 years, 9 months ago)

Its not insecurity at all, it just interests me with your point of view......

If i dislike something i would normaly go about it by explaining myself a bit.


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Re: my eyes are dull and dusty [Re: Corporal Kielbasa]
    #5531742 - 04/18/06 11:08 PM (17 years, 9 months ago)

Well, my name is psilocyberin. I currently live in Nashville and I dislike poems with words like menelevence in them.

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Re: my eyes are dull and dusty [Re: SneezingPenis]
    #5531762 - 04/18/06 11:13 PM (17 years, 9 months ago)

ha ha thats better!

I didn't even want to write a poem. I had a few points i wanted to discuss, but it came out as a poem.


i should proably stay away from all public speaking do to my lack of imagination and insight, not to mention my low govenment standerdised education.


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Re: my eyes are dull and dusty [Re: Corporal Kielbasa]
    #5531816 - 04/18/06 11:26 PM (17 years, 9 months ago)

why? it didnt stop Dan Quayle or GWB.


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