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Offlinegluke bastid
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Haiku
    #5270882 - 02/06/06 07:01 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

"closing time"


Ceiling vents for Breeze
Paper crumpled in denim
Student shoulders bag


submit yours!  :cool:


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Re: Haiku [Re: gluke bastid]
    #5271044 - 02/06/06 07:39 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

sun held in my hand
trees bending to kiss the earth
one connectedness
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Re: Haiku [Re: kaniz]
    #5271050 - 02/06/06 07:42 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

penis penis yea
throbbing penis of magic
yum yum yum penis

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Re: Haiku [Re: TheCow]
    #5272901 - 02/07/06 10:51 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

Nice!
Inspired two more:


opening a book
the penis resting in bed
is alive and dead

Sweat shines the hot spines
yummy penis, woman grins
red hand strikes wet skin


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Re: Haiku [Re: gluke bastid]
    #5273200 - 02/07/06 12:13 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

awaiting my fate
perhaps i will be expelled
only time will tell


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Re: Haiku [Re: freddurgan]
    #5273357 - 02/07/06 12:50 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

It's grown cold in here.
Though I'm wearing three layers
of long underwear.

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Re: Haiku [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #5273548 - 02/07/06 01:41 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

I'm sick and weary
My body aches; head compressed
At least I miss work.


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Re: Haiku [Re: Blastrid]
    #5273875 - 02/07/06 03:16 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

I am here at work
Surfing instead of working
I need a new job

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Re: Haiku [Re: ShattrdHarlequin]
    #5274048 - 02/07/06 04:21 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)


the printer is down
girl in black shoes sighs a pout
and calls the help desk


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Re: Haiku [Re: gluke bastid]
    #5275833 - 02/07/06 11:46 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

i take a number
settle down feverishly
and collect payment


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Re: Haiku [Re: TheQueen]
    #5276266 - 02/08/06 04:01 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

The shout of the world seems gone
but it's collected
in the hollowed stump of oak.

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Re: Haiku [Re: Lakefingers]
    #5276510 - 02/08/06 08:10 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

McDonald's breakfast.
It's great when it's hot and fresh..
but sometimes it's not. :frown:

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Re: Haiku [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #5276561 - 02/08/06 08:41 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

Hey, did I mention
this thread totally kicks ass?
Haikus rock my socks.

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Re: Haiku [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #5276674 - 02/08/06 09:29 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

This thread does kick ass
the moments are captured well
poems are the shit


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Re: Haiku [Re: freddurgan]
    #5276756 - 02/08/06 10:05 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

Your avatar rocks.
There's just something about it...
Where did it come from?  :grin:

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Re: Haiku *DELETED* [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #5276901 - 02/08/06 10:45 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

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Re: Haiku [Re: Lakefingers]
    #5281301 - 02/09/06 10:40 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)


Cold wind down the lane
Young ladies walk by in pairs
Phone rings, hit ignore



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Re: Haiku [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #5281380 - 02/09/06 11:07 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

the puppet kicks ass
so aptly named flat eric
by mr. oizo


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Re: Haiku [Re: freddurgan]
    #5281509 - 02/09/06 11:55 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

Sweeeeeeet.

...d'oh!

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Re: Haiku [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #5281640 - 02/09/06 12:37 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)



not a haiku, but
full of sweetness and despair
a fine poem still



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Re: Haiku [Re: gluke bastid]
    #5281745 - 02/09/06 01:07 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

out of weed for days
smoking stems for just the taste
thank god for coitus


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Re: Haiku [Re: mrsautoman]
    #5282445 - 02/09/06 04:22 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

Longing for biscuits
Resign myself to French toast
Will my munchies be appeased?

:grin:


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Re: Haiku [Re: mrsautoman]
    #5284080 - 02/09/06 11:12 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

mrsautoman
your haiku was fantastic
keep on keepin on


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Re: Haiku [Re: freddurgan]
    #5287713 - 02/11/06 12:27 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

why did this thread die?
haikus relax me big time
way more than drugs do


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Re: Haiku *DELETED* [Re: freddurgan]
    #5287899 - 02/11/06 04:06 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

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Re: Haiku [Re: Lakefingers]
    #5288251 - 02/11/06 09:55 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

lakefingers is dumb
he is not writing haikus
it's five, seven, five.

(not 7, 5, 7)

good poems anyway
:grin: :heart: :mushroom2:

Edited by jmg5 (02/11/06 09:57 AM)

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Re: Haiku [Re: jmg5]
    #5289739 - 02/11/06 07:16 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

empty consumption
our way of life, Western
securing freedom

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    #5290806 - 02/12/06 05:11 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

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Re: Haiku [Re: Lakefingers]
    #5291217 - 02/12/06 11:36 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

the joy of finding
that perfect combination
does not diminish


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Re: Haiku *DELETED* [Re: freddurgan]
    #5293878 - 02/13/06 06:37 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

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Re: Haiku [Re: Lakefingers]
    #5294326 - 02/13/06 11:01 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

Oh sweet Mary Jane
No one loves you like I do
Will you be my wife?


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Re: Haiku [Re: mrsautoman]
    #5294402 - 02/13/06 11:23 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

mrsautoman
how about menages a trois?
if your love says yes


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Re: Haiku [Re: freddurgan]
    #5295534 - 02/13/06 03:55 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)



Japan is cool, but
too hungry to write haiku
order chinese food



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Re: Haiku [Re: gluke bastid]
    #5295605 - 02/13/06 04:07 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

TO-CON-VEY ONE'S MOOD
IN SEV-EN-TEEN SYLL-ABLE-S
IS VE-RY DIF-FIC

:wink:


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Re: Haiku [Re: LuciferSam]
    #5297502 - 02/13/06 11:26 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

a menages a trip
all tore up in the forest
see the face of god


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Re: Haiku [Re: Lakefingers]
    #5302922 - 02/15/06 12:10 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

Quote:

Lakefingers said:
:smile:

haikus can be so
that is seven-five-seven
and some have free verse

a good ol' haiku
is just as you say it is
17 sonants

when translating these
the meaning is destroyed
and in this postmodern world haikus
can be
written
however one wants,
regardless
the consequences.
But just so you know: haikus "should" contain two images,
movement,
and traditionally a twist.
This is how most good translators translate from foreign languages,
this is how Kerouac wrote his, e.g.:
"Frozen
    in the birdbath
A leaf."
And this is how Shiki is translated:
?In the abandoned boat,
the hail
bounces about.?

I predict the thread
will get all crazy and shit
now with this knowledge.




that I did not know
thank you for pointing that out
shroomery member

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Re: Haiku [Re: Lakefingers]
    #5307089 - 02/16/06 01:44 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

Quote:

Lakefingers said:
:smile:

haikus can be so
that is seven-five-seven
and some have free verse

a good ol' haiku
is just as you say it is
17 sonants

when translating these
the meaning is destroyed
and in this postmodern world haikus
can be
written
however one wants,
regardless
the consequences.
But just so you know: haikus "should" contain two images,
movement,
and traditionally a twist.
This is how most good translators translate from foreign languages,
this is how Kerouac wrote his, e.g.:
"Frozen
    in the birdbath
A leaf."
And this is how Shiki is translated:
?In the abandoned boat,
the hail
bounces about.?

I predict the thread
will get all crazy and shit
now with this knowledge.




In addition, in traditional haiku there isn't really an "I" or a "you." Haikus usually deal with a moment in time and space, a happening. Of course the poetry comes from the author's perception, but one should breathe as little personal subjectivity into a haiku as possible

for example, a classic (not 5-7-5 due to being translated from japanese):

As Cherry Blossoms fall
The temple is glimpsed
Through twigs and branches

While there is a point of view implied in the poem-as someone is clearly doing the glimpsing-the impact of the human ego is brought down to a minimum. This is why traditional Japanese arts reflected a very zen nature. Simply trying to capture a moment as it happens outside of your own mind.


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Re: Haiku [Re: gluke bastid]
    #5314427 - 02/18/06 07:50 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

when the earth slumbers
under a blanket of snow
what does she dream of?


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Re: Haiku [Re: mrsautoman]
    #5317567 - 02/19/06 07:36 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)


smiling at oak desk
fat man with beer and thai food
bumps his favorite thread


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Re: Haiku [Re: gluke bastid]
    #5318526 - 02/20/06 01:29 AM (18 years, 1 month ago)

bong rip number five
indica sweet indica
where are my brain cells?

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Re: Haiku [Re: funkylime]
    #5321927 - 02/20/06 09:37 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

I got skills unused
like fallopian tubes
in a dyke

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