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Offlinemrsautoman
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Re: Haiku [Re: gluke bastid]
    #5281745 - 02/09/06 01:07 PM (17 years, 11 months ago)

out of weed for days
smoking stems for just the taste
thank god for coitus


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Re: Haiku [Re: mrsautoman]
    #5282445 - 02/09/06 04:22 PM (17 years, 11 months ago)

Longing for biscuits
Resign myself to French toast
Will my munchies be appeased?

:grin:


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Re: Haiku [Re: mrsautoman]
    #5284080 - 02/09/06 11:12 PM (17 years, 11 months ago)

mrsautoman
your haiku was fantastic
keep on keepin on


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Re: Haiku [Re: freddurgan]
    #5287713 - 02/11/06 12:27 AM (17 years, 11 months ago)

why did this thread die?
haikus relax me big time
way more than drugs do


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InvisibleLakefingers

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Re: Haiku [Re: freddurgan]
    #5287899 - 02/11/06 04:06 AM (17 years, 11 months ago)

freddurgan bangs his soft head
and taps his finger
the thread is not dead at all


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Re: Haiku [Re: Lakefingers]
    #5288251 - 02/11/06 09:55 AM (17 years, 11 months ago)

lakefingers is dumb
he is not writing haikus
it's five, seven, five.

(not 7, 5, 7)

good poems anyway
:grin: :heart: :mushroom2:


Edited by jmg5 (02/11/06 09:57 AM)


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Re: Haiku [Re: jmg5]
    #5289739 - 02/11/06 07:16 PM (17 years, 11 months ago)

empty consumption
our way of life, Western
securing freedom


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InvisibleLakefingers

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Re: Haiku [Re: jmg5]
    #5290806 - 02/12/06 05:11 AM (17 years, 11 months ago)

:smile:

haikus can be so
that is seven-five-seven
and some have free verse

a good ol' haiku
is just as you say it is
17 sonants

when translating these
the meaning is destroyed
and in this postmodern world haikus
can be
written
however one wants,
regardless
the consequences.
But just so you know: haikus "should" contain two images,
movement,
and traditionally a twist.
This is how most good translators translate from foreign languages,
this is how Kerouac wrote his, e.g.:
"Frozen
    in the birdbath
A leaf."
And this is how Shiki is translated:
?In the abandoned boat,
the hail
bounces about.?

I predict the thread
will get all crazy and shit
now with this knowledge.


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Re: Haiku [Re: Lakefingers]
    #5291217 - 02/12/06 11:36 AM (17 years, 11 months ago)

the joy of finding
that perfect combination
does not diminish


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InvisibleLakefingers

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Re: Haiku [Re: freddurgan]
    #5293878 - 02/13/06 06:37 AM (17 years, 11 months ago)

red beet soup with carrots, onions and
garlic in a veggie broth
cooling now; stop by in an hour


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Re: Haiku [Re: Lakefingers]
    #5294326 - 02/13/06 11:01 AM (17 years, 11 months ago)

Oh sweet Mary Jane
No one loves you like I do
Will you be my wife?


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Re: Haiku [Re: mrsautoman]
    #5294402 - 02/13/06 11:23 AM (17 years, 11 months ago)

mrsautoman
how about menages a trois?
if your love says yes


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Re: Haiku [Re: freddurgan]
    #5295534 - 02/13/06 03:55 PM (17 years, 11 months ago)



Japan is cool, but
too hungry to write haiku
order chinese food



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Re: Haiku [Re: gluke bastid]
    #5295605 - 02/13/06 04:07 PM (17 years, 11 months ago)

TO-CON-VEY ONE'S MOOD
IN SEV-EN-TEEN SYLL-ABLE-S
IS VE-RY DIF-FIC

:wink:


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Re: Haiku [Re: LuciferSam]
    #5297502 - 02/13/06 11:26 PM (17 years, 11 months ago)

a menages a trip
all tore up in the forest
see the face of god


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InvisibleLakefingers

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Re: Haiku [Re: mrsautoman]
    #5298364 - 02/14/06 08:06 AM (17 years, 11 months ago)

thick saltpeter-fog

pounding inland from the sea

enervating clime


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Re: Haiku [Re: Lakefingers]
    #5302922 - 02/15/06 12:10 PM (17 years, 11 months ago)

Quote:

Lakefingers said:
:smile:

haikus can be so
that is seven-five-seven
and some have free verse

a good ol' haiku
is just as you say it is
17 sonants

when translating these
the meaning is destroyed
and in this postmodern world haikus
can be
written
however one wants,
regardless
the consequences.
But just so you know: haikus "should" contain two images,
movement,
and traditionally a twist.
This is how most good translators translate from foreign languages,
this is how Kerouac wrote his, e.g.:
"Frozen
    in the birdbath
A leaf."
And this is how Shiki is translated:
?In the abandoned boat,
the hail
bounces about.?

I predict the thread
will get all crazy and shit
now with this knowledge.




that I did not know
thank you for pointing that out
shroomery member

:smile:


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Offlinegluke bastid
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Re: Haiku [Re: Lakefingers]
    #5307089 - 02/16/06 01:44 PM (17 years, 11 months ago)

Quote:

Lakefingers said:
:smile:

haikus can be so
that is seven-five-seven
and some have free verse

a good ol' haiku
is just as you say it is
17 sonants

when translating these
the meaning is destroyed
and in this postmodern world haikus
can be
written
however one wants,
regardless
the consequences.
But just so you know: haikus "should" contain two images,
movement,
and traditionally a twist.
This is how most good translators translate from foreign languages,
this is how Kerouac wrote his, e.g.:
"Frozen
    in the birdbath
A leaf."
And this is how Shiki is translated:
?In the abandoned boat,
the hail
bounces about.?

I predict the thread
will get all crazy and shit
now with this knowledge.




In addition, in traditional haiku there isn't really an "I" or a "you." Haikus usually deal with a moment in time and space, a happening. Of course the poetry comes from the author's perception, but one should breathe as little personal subjectivity into a haiku as possible

for example, a classic (not 5-7-5 due to being translated from japanese):

As Cherry Blossoms fall
The temple is glimpsed
Through twigs and branches

While there is a point of view implied in the poem-as someone is clearly doing the glimpsing-the impact of the human ego is brought down to a minimum. This is why traditional Japanese arts reflected a very zen nature. Simply trying to capture a moment as it happens outside of your own mind.


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Re: Haiku [Re: gluke bastid]
    #5314427 - 02/18/06 07:50 PM (17 years, 11 months ago)

when the earth slumbers
under a blanket of snow
what does she dream of?


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Re: Haiku [Re: mrsautoman]
    #5317567 - 02/19/06 07:36 PM (17 years, 11 months ago)


smiling at oak desk
fat man with beer and thai food
bumps his favorite thread


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