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Offlinefreddurgan
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First song - only 2 minutes and I could use constructive criticism
    #5191713 - 01/17/06 04:08 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

http://freddurgan.ath.cx/Song.mp3

It's sort of a house/psychedelic thing. But it's mainly house. I don't really know what to call it. Parts of it I like, parts of it I don't. I just wanted to finish a song for once in my life.

Please listen though, and constructive criticism would be nice. I don't like having people give me criticism at all so this is hard. If you're going to just bash the song then please don't reply.

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Re: First song - only 2 minutes and I could use constructive criticism [Re: freddurgan]
    #5191742 - 01/17/06 04:16 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

Ok, I'm not much of a House Music guy, but I will take a shot...

firstly, I really like your tones. It seems from the house I have heard, the type of percussion samples really makes or breaks the song. Your kick is solid and unique, as are your weirdo effects stuff that go in and out.

Here's my constructive part--think about what you're making this song for. To dance to? to listen thru headphones? loud speakers? Thinking of the end result might make it easier to come up with the means to get there, if you follow.
I really like the psychedelic aspects of it, especially in the first half. my ears get bored with the semi-typical use of vocal samples, but that's not to say the presence of them is bad. I just think you can come up with some more clever uses of them.
Also I'd like to hear more of a foundation slowly built upon that kickass kickdrum. I hear a little bass line appear and disappear as well as a low riff, but nothing too substantial.

I think you have a great beginning, but I'd recommend building upon what you have and thinking more creatively with where you can take it.
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