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OfflineCptnGarden
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another new triphop song - better producing this time...
    #4738782 - 09/30/05 09:15 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

tell me what you think... this is my second time using FL5... still had to convert out to sonar 4 for final touches and vocals... fruityloops seems to be getting a little easier to use now...

Edited by KidBotany (12/19/06 06:28 PM)

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Re: another new triphop song - better producing this time... [Re: CptnGarden]
    #4738863 - 09/30/05 09:34 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

thats nice shit man. ends a little abruptly in my opinion though


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Re: another new triphop song - better producing this time... [Re: DeathCompany]
    #4740848 - 10/01/05 12:34 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

bump.... thanks dude, they are only gonna get better the more i get to know these two top of the line programs.

Edited by ShroomieOfDoomie (10/01/05 01:56 PM)

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Re: another new triphop song - better producing this time... [Re: CptnGarden]
    #4744329 - 10/02/05 04:24 AM (18 years, 5 months ago)

first thing I noticed was that the drums are drenched in reverb, maybe it was supposed to be like it but a little less reverb would probably sound better. (same for the voice, both will sound more powerfull and more distinct with a litle less reverb)

it's a nice and mellow track with some interesting sounds, keep 'em coming :cool:

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Re: another new triphop song - better producing this time... [Re: stefan]
    #4749539 - 10/03/05 02:01 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

a lot better than yhe last one in my opinion, for my taste
i found the reeverbs a bit a lot but again to my ear
melodies was really cool overall and beat was good
like the deep cutted synth sounds too
didnt like the vocal style, not my taste..it was a big dissapointment in the track for me
but overall i really liked it.plz keep them comin!!!!

keep em comingkeep em comingkeep em comingkeep em comingkeep em comingkeep em comingkeep em comingkeep em comingkeep em comikeep em comingnkeep em cominggkeep em comingkeep em comingkeep em comingkeep em coming

:heart: :heart: :heart: :sun: :sun: :thumbup: :thumbup:


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Re: another new triphop song - better producing this time... [Re: butterflydawn]
    #4749633 - 10/03/05 02:19 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

thanks for the comment dawn :thumbup:

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Re: another new triphop song - better producing this time... [Re: CptnGarden]
    #4751014 - 10/03/05 07:15 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

You're on your way Shroomie... Great improvement so far!

Keep an open ear to the production techniques of your favorite artists... how each instrument sounds.

For my taste, and mosts to be honest, there's way too much reverb on the track, especially the drums. What purpose does reverb serve? well, it creates a space that the music exists. It simulates a room or environment (large hall, tube, etc) Think of effects (and instruments for that matter) to serve a purpose in creating a context for the melodies, rhythms and harmonies to exist and tell the story. The tone is the premise, the notes and riffs are the story.

I hope this helps... the best way to improve is more practice! Just keep messing with everything in FL, and keep listening to your influences...

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Re: another new triphop song - better producing this time... [Re: CptnGarden]
    #4752834 - 10/04/05 01:45 AM (18 years, 5 months ago)

its my pleasure


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Re: another new triphop song - better producing this time... [Re: butterflydawn]
    #4761595 - 10/05/05 11:18 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

any lyrics any time
any rhythm any rhyme
any time any place
any person any face
let the lyrics in the rhyme
make fractals out of time
any body any race
let the beat take its place
so lets see you hit the dance-floor dancerby jones
see how the rhythm makes jello of your bones
see how your body handles dance-beat flows
so lets turn this up as loud as it goes



feel the rhythm in your veins take you up to outter space
give you the power to teleport from place to place
show you the world with a new pair of eyes
reading you the chapters from the passages of life
give you magic give you skill
give you bravery to killgive you rhymes give you beats
make you feel make you see
the rhythm and the rhymes bring together you and I
to share the vibe and to have a good time

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Re: another new triphop song - better producing this time... [Re: CptnGarden]
    #4762895 - 10/06/05 08:05 AM (18 years, 5 months ago)

I like teh tune in the backround, nice song

but as for that robot voice :thumbdown: :thumbdown: :thumbdown:


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Re: another new triphop song - better producing this time... [Re: XUL]
    #4762964 - 10/06/05 08:26 AM (18 years, 5 months ago)

Yeah loose the robot shit man that sucks...

The tune is amazing man! Really good I can't stop listening to this shit hehe! :laugh:


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