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Short essay I just wrote.
    #4503032 - 08/06/05 04:36 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

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Pain. Ego. Subjectively. It's all relative to the upbringing of each of these bi-pedal carbon based life forms known as Humans. The constant up and downs, the intense

spectrum of our seemingly endless emotional. One second you're on top of the world, but the next, you're sucking the proverbial barrel of a bleakness that will come and go like the tides of the ocean.

Some of us humans just aren't build for this. I'm not talking mental illness, but just the way we perceive other humans reality. We have so many misconceptions of how

others perceive the universe around them. Too many false misconceptions of how we are making impressions on other humans who are going through the same exact

thing, sure there are exceptions to some of these people, but it seems to mostly effect famous humans. They seem to get a  false sense of security from being in a movie, making a CD, doing whatever the hell they can do. Professional exploitation at its best.

Sure they've got a talent, but there are people out there who have BETTER skills than them. The only difference if they can get their name

out, It's like high school to the extreme.

Holy shit I just COMPLETELY lost my train of thought. I'll make some revisions to to this later, and hopefully it will be a little more coherent.




:thumbdown:

I think this if the first thing I have ever written. Come on people, help me out.


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
    #4503041 - 08/06/05 04:38 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

i'm trying to sound really intelligent, but there is no substance here...blah blah blah, i'm full of shit.

jk...it was good.


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: Vex]
    #4503070 - 08/06/05 04:45 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

No substance? Thanks :smile:. I don't even know what the fuck is coming out of my keyboard. These xannies make me a little retarded.


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
    #4503075 - 08/06/05 04:47 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

NO, i said i was just kidding. : /

maybe a bit pretentious though...hmm, yeah.


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
    #4503081 - 08/06/05 04:48 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

Sounds like a string of thoughts...not necessarily hooked together by language.

Drafts are good jumping off points.  Look at it tomorrow, refine it, expand on thoughts, say it better.  :sun:


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: Vex]
    #4503087 - 08/06/05 04:49 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

Yeah I'm guessing it sucks pretty fucking badly. :lol:

I didn't even pay attention to what I was typing most of the time.


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
    #4503092 - 08/06/05 04:52 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

Not too terribly bad, considering it's your very first essay. But Bobo made some good suggestions there....


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
    #4503093 - 08/06/05 04:53 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

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HELLA_TIGHT said:
Quote:

Pain. Ego. Subjectively. It's all relative to the upbringing of each of these bi-pedal carbon based life forms known as Humans. The constant up and downs, the intense
spectrum of our seemingly endless emotional (emotional what?). One second you're on top of the world, but the next, you're sucking the proverbial barrel of a bleakness that will come and go like the tides of the ocean.

Some of us humans just aren't build for this. I'm not talking mental illness, but just the way we perceive other humans reality. We have so many misconceptions of how
others perceive the universe around them. Too many false misconceptions of how we are making impressions on other humans who are going through the same exact
thing.

This state is most reasonably noted in memberd of humanity with degrees of fame or noteriety. They seem to get a  false sense of security from being in a movie, making a CD, doing whatever whatever sells to the public. Professional exploitation at its best.

These people may have innate talent and polished skill, but there are people out there who have BETTER skills than them. The only difference if they can get their name out, It's like high school to the extreme.

Holy shit I just COMPLETELY lost my train of thought. I'll make some revisions to to this later, and hopefully it will be a little more coherent.




:thumbdown:

I think this if the first thing I have ever written. Come on people, help me out.




dude i tried to edit revise it but at the end i didnt know what the hell you were getting at :smirk:

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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: Le_Canard]
    #4503097 - 08/06/05 04:55 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

When Bobo speaks, people should listen.


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: blissedout]
    #4503108 - 08/06/05 04:59 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

Yep! He's not only hilarious sometimes, he's also probably one the more intelligent people on these forums. :laugh:


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: Le_Canard]
    #4503115 - 08/06/05 05:03 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

Well... he IS an english major. I think I'll take his advice.


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: Le_Canard]
    #4503117 - 08/06/05 05:03 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

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ToiletDuk said:
Not too terribly bad, considering it's your very first essay. But Bobo made some good suggestions there....




:thumbup:


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
    #4503128 - 08/06/05 05:11 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

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HELLA_TIGHT said:
Well... he IS an english major. I think I'll take his advice.





WAS cockfuck.  I've got my degree.  :wink: 

Branch out from the ideas, there, tho.  Might lead to something cool.  Just avoid cliched expressions and teen-angst language.  :wink:


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OneMoreRobot3021 said:
the pub mods are a cancer on our society as a whole.
pantsboy said:
Do kittens contain mescaline?  Because they should.

My GF & ME :heart:


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: Bobo]
    #4503137 - 08/06/05 05:18 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

You're meaning to tell me you might have been that flaming enlgish teahcer I had in 9th grade?


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: THE KRAT BARON]
    #4503159 - 08/06/05 05:30 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

That's impossible.  Unless you went through 9th grade at age 1 and I was teaching freshman highschool curriculum at around age 7.  I mean, I'm talented--EVERYONE knows that :smirk:--but I'm not THAT smart.  :wink:


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the pub mods are a cancer on our society as a whole.
pantsboy said:
Do kittens contain mescaline?  Because they should.

My GF & ME :heart:


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: Bobo]
    #4503269 - 08/06/05 09:27 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

Woah. I'm sorrry guys. 4 mg'sof xanax will do that to you. I just woke up in my bed with music playing and all my lights on, not knowing how I got there.


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
    #4503284 - 08/06/05 09:37 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

Holy shit. I'm ashamed. Regret. :sad:

I hate when I do this shit. :nonono:

I think I might have to take a little break. I'll see you guys in a few days.


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
    #4503287 - 08/06/05 09:38 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

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HELLA_TIGHT said:
I just woke up in my bed with music playing and all my lights on, not knowing how I got there.




I hate it when that happens!

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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
    #4503300 - 08/06/05 09:58 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

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HELLA_TIGHT said:
Holy shit. I'm ashamed. Regret. :sad:




No worries, man. If that's the worst that you have done, then we can only be so lucky.


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Re: Short essay I just wrote. [Re: HELLA_TIGHT]
    #4503303 - 08/06/05 10:02 AM (11 years, 4 months ago)

It just seemed a little too short for the things you were talking about.


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