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XUL
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what makes a psy song?? help wanted
#4292941 - 06/13/05 07:53 PM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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yo, listen to my first song on here, and tell me what I can do to make it sound more professional. Seems its not sounding right.. I dunno wats up.
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BanJankri
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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: XUL]
#4293482 - 06/13/05 10:15 PM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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I like the sample at the start, creates a dark atmosphere. The kick is really weak There are no basslines that I can hear of Too long intro if you ask me It sounds like a more techtrance track rather than a psytrance, which isnt a bad thing but analyze the psytech music more. The song is incomplete I guess so this is all for now.
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XUL
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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: BanJankri]
#4293503 - 06/13/05 10:19 PM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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i think u listened to the wrong one,., listen to "melodic"
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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: XUL]
#4293893 - 06/14/05 12:24 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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the player from myspace doen't seem to work in my Opera browser anyone know what I can do about it?
standalone players on these ind of websites suck anyway, it would be better (for me ) if everyone used a site that has mp3's on it
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Wysefool
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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: stefan]
#4293966 - 06/14/05 12:54 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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I think you need some cool tribal instruments and classical music and then you remix it and make it glitchy and trippy. Add a good trancey bass. A bunch of those sounds that go wowowowo fading left to right... Drug references, you could make a part where it says something about nitrous and then you get the wah-wahs .
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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: Wysefool]
#4294135 - 06/14/05 02:02 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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Well, I will say the sound effect of what sounds like water droplets is damn good. That kick drum needs to be a lot deeper. More hard hitting. And for god sakes, get a tight bassline in there. Bass is very important. It gets those raving chicks all wet.
Wysefool is also right about using a sample. The right one used can make a good song a great song in my opinion.
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Mirth
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It NEEDS a more powerful trance inducing back/base beat . Dont worry about having a complex back beat - it needs to be hypnotic - as it is, its not powerful enough .
On the plus side there are some nice loops and sounds but maybe you could think of the proggression as a whole and make it more of an adventure and it also could do with ending less abruptly . Listen to some mozart or hallucinogen maybe .
Thanks for the song, keep us updated if you make another version .
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gema
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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: Mirth]
#4295827 - 06/14/05 05:17 PM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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what makes a psy song?? well, its gotta suck.
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XUL
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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: gema]
#4296583 - 06/14/05 08:03 PM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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dont make me kill
you shniggle
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Wysefool
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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: XUL]
#4296850 - 06/14/05 09:08 PM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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gema -gema?
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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: XUL]
#4297492 - 06/14/05 11:33 PM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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Quote:
what makes a psy song??
cool samples laid over boring, generic beats.
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