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OfflineXUL
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what makes a psy song?? help wanted
    #4292941 - 06/13/05 09:53 PM (11 years, 5 months ago)

yo, listen to my first song on here, and tell me what I can do to make it sound more professional. Seems its not sounding right.. I dunno wats up.

http://www.myspace.com/wrainmaker

I love feedback, so SPILL it

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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: XUL]
    #4293482 - 06/14/05 12:15 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

I like the sample at the start, creates a dark atmosphere.
The kick is really weak
There are no basslines that I can hear of
Too long intro if you ask me
It sounds like a more techtrance track rather than a psytrance, which isnt a bad thing but analyze the psytech music more.
The song is incomplete I guess so this is all for now.


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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: BanJankri]
    #4293503 - 06/14/05 12:19 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

i think u listened to the wrong one,., listen to "melodic"


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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: XUL]
    #4293893 - 06/14/05 02:24 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

the player from myspace doen't seem to work in my Opera browser :thumbdown:
anyone know what I can do about it?

standalone players on these ind of websites suck anyway, it would be better (for me :lol:) if everyone used a site that has mp3's on it :smirk:


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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: stefan]
    #4293966 - 06/14/05 02:54 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

I think you need some cool tribal instruments and classical music and then you remix it and make it glitchy and trippy. Add a good trancey bass. A bunch of those sounds that go wowowowo fading left to right... Drug references, you could make a part where it says something about nitrous and then you get the wah-wahs :tongue:.


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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: Wysefool]
    #4294135 - 06/14/05 04:02 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

Well, I will say the sound effect of what sounds like water droplets is damn good.  That kick drum needs to be a lot deeper.  More hard hitting.  And for god sakes, get a tight bassline in there.  Bass is very important.  It gets those raving chicks all wet.  :smile:

Wysefool is also right about using a sample.  The right one used can make a good song a great song in my opinion.


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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: Penguarky Tunguin]
    #4295271 - 06/14/05 05:23 PM (11 years, 5 months ago)

It NEEDS a more powerful trance inducing back/base beat .
Dont worry about having a complex back beat - it needs to be hypnotic - as it is, its not powerful enough .

On the plus side there are some nice loops and sounds but maybe you could think of the proggression as a whole and make it more of an adventure and it also could do with ending less abruptly .
Listen to some mozart or hallucinogen maybe .

Thanks for the song, keep us updated if you make another version .


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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: Mirth]
    #4295827 - 06/14/05 07:17 PM (11 years, 5 months ago)

what makes a psy song?? well, its gotta suck.  :tongue:


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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: gema]
    #4296583 - 06/14/05 10:03 PM (11 years, 5 months ago)

dont make me kill


you shniggle :laugh:


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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: XUL]
    #4296850 - 06/14/05 11:08 PM (11 years, 5 months ago)

gema -gema?


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Re: what makes a psy song?? help wanted [Re: XUL]
    #4297492 - 06/15/05 01:33 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

Quote:

what makes a psy song??




cool samples laid over boring, generic beats.


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