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My high poem
    #4289095 - 06/12/05 11:41 PM (11 years, 10 months ago)

I wrote this when I first started getting high.. It was written in the winter, so thats why its a dark piece. But yea,., I decided I would share it.


            ominous clouds envelope far-flung meadows
          storming with hypnosis and bellowing in repose
        as pupils swollen from the pollen of inducive flowers
            are woken by the tocsin of potent showers
                and a sudden lust for pleasure
                comes like a burning fervour
   
              steals in such a grotesque silhouette
                  his elegant fetish for flesh
                  irresistible to the touch
                  draws upon her pallid radiance

              and as one tricklet of blood is lost
            one thousand more raindrops are earased
                    and everything stops
          to the tincture of sorrow that is carved in stone
                      and cries alone
                      like distant rune
                      far from halcyon

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Do not wait to strike until the iron is hot; but make it hot by striking.
-W.B. Yeats


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Re: My high poem [Re: XUL]
    #4291856 - 06/13/05 05:16 PM (11 years, 10 months ago)

some good imagery in there. ltos of descriptive words are always good in poetry.


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