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InvisibleMovingTarget

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    #4093187 - 04/24/05 11:06 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

Ok, opinions are very much welcome for this thingy I did for a persons website recently....

Says plasma Blossom btw, its for a website to do with the new breed of manic shootem ups...




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Re: digy graffy]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]*** [Re: MovingTarget]
    #4094447 - 04/25/05 10:30 AM (11 years, 9 months ago)

please?


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Re: digy graffy]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]*** [Re: MovingTarget]
    #4095130 - 04/25/05 03:08 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

Is it suposed to look like it's cut off at the bottom?


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Re: digy graffy]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]*** [Re: MeatSpace]
    #4095321 - 04/25/05 03:58 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

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MeatSpace said:
Is it suposed to look like it's cut off at the bottom?




Good question.

Also, to the original poster: Your line art is very crisp and fresh, but it's self-defeating to have a logo that's hard to read...

further, I think the color scheme is kind of weak... that teal color especially.

And finally, I don't like how you used such completely different "fills" for the B and M versus the middle of the word... it's very distracting to the eyes, and first impression does not see a word at all as a result.

Hope that wasn't too harsh... instructive criticism. :smile:

Edit: Rethinking my comment about the fills on blossom... it's not so much the fact that it's different from the B and the M, the problem is the middle is filled with a pattern that's the same color as the background behind the word collectively... that's why you don't see the word in first impression.

Here's an idea, just throwing it out there... you could kind of 'fade' the red from the B and the M towards the center of the word... so it fades from solid red, to the purple pattern, then back to the solid red. That'd be cool.


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Re: digy graffy]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]*** [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #4095624 - 04/25/05 05:14 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

"Is it suposed to look like it's cut off at the bottom?"  Yes :laugh:

Jacques, thanks for the constructive crit, I think the final thing you mentioned would be nice but I'm not convinced it'd look better...

'Plasma Blossom' is written nearby at the top of the website so the readability isnt so much of an issue.

The plasma looks off but I cant figure out how I could make it look better.


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Re: digy graffy]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]*** [Re: MovingTarget]
    #4095705 - 04/25/05 05:32 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

Around the "blossom" you've got crisp black edges, then soft purple edges but only soft green edges around the "plasma".

You might try putting a crisp border around the "plasma" as well, might give it some better definition, make it stand out


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Re: digy graffy]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]*** [Re: MovingTarget]
    #4096072 - 04/25/05 06:43 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

No way.
The way the soft and hard lines are makes
it look like it's breaking though something.
I like the lines, but the warm colors don't fit.


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Re: Digital picture [Re: MovingTarget]
    #4096808 - 04/25/05 09:38 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

I don't much like the green blur around the top word which is sposed to read plasma? it looks like plasrja, the m looks silly


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Re: Digital picture [Re: faslimy]
    #4141096 - 05/06/05 08:39 AM (11 years, 9 months ago)

very clean!


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