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OfflineJon
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Some more poetry
    #4074440 - 04/19/05 10:24 PM (12 years, 1 month ago)

As you can see I wasnt in the best of moods when I wrote this, a few year later after I found it again I was kinda suprised with my writing, so I decided to share it. Enjoy.

He walked that night on a cold crescent moon, pushing out the memories of day.
He said "mother let me get you help" she replied "Leave me where I lay."
The needles and nails settled into my bloodstream, waking yet shaking.
The chinaman blessed his idol while the german apprentice keeps baking.
A bird covered in ashes of coals showered the day into night.
Her last words to him were "you were always right."
Embalmed by the tears, he was a dryer man than any other.
Locked in an empty room, every answer a single mutter.
He ignored the light hidden in his despair, told his emotions goodbye.
His wifes departing words "one day ill find the tear in your eye."
He walked that night with a cut on his arm and as pale as a dove.
He sat weeping at his cowardice and chose a reason to live, over a reason to love.


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OfflinePiperAtThyGates
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Re: Some more poetry [Re: Jon]
    #4074615 - 04/19/05 11:03 PM (12 years, 1 month ago)

BEAUTIFUL


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OfflinePinballWizard
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Re: Some more poetry [Re: Jon]
    #4074725 - 04/19/05 11:27 PM (12 years, 1 month ago)

Very nice.


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OfflineOtto
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Re: Some more poetry [Re: Jon]
    #4074959 - 04/20/05 12:28 AM (12 years, 1 month ago)

Awesome!


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Re: Some more poetry [Re: Otto]
    #4141121 - 05/06/05 08:46 AM (12 years, 26 days ago)

wonderful !;)


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