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OfflineEntropic
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Registered: 07/20/04
Posts: 38
Last seen: 13 years, 5 months
Drunken poem writing
    #4043608 - 04/12/05 01:46 AM (13 years, 7 months ago)

About a girl...

Another night of listless ambition,
caught in a storm of cloudy cognition,
it's a strange disposition fostered by my volition,
perhaps it's a zest for true erudition?
or maybe it's baseless and just supposition.
no matter the reasons that's my exposition.

Stuck in the character of a jolly host,
tired of questioning myself without riposte,
a character flaw I try to hide the most,
so for once I'm typing the questions with which I'm most engrossed.

Still I don't know if I can say with finesse what I want to profess,
regardless my desire it's something I try to repress,
even now my mind tells me to regress,
extinguish the thought, try to supress,
but maybe I'm drunk enough to finally transgress (is that a word?).
or maybe writing this is a source of undue stress.

I sit at the computer because of you,
caught between thoughts I can't subdue,
but still can't quite put into the field of view,
instead of revealing my thoughts I've gone askew,
these type of troubling choices are something I like to eschew.

They say all is fair in love and war,
a sentiment I try to inure,
but this mixture of both I'm loathe to endure,
my mind keeps telling me it's just me being immature.

I feel like I'm walking on a plateau,
I step to the edge and find myself with only sky below,
but with my demeanor lately it's seems almost quid pro quo,
watching myself fall seems almost like a tableau.

One last stanza to see myself though,
then hopefully I'll return to what I'm used to,
but as of now my biggest fear remains what I think of you,
if I said the three words my mind tells me I want to,
I'm afraid that as the sound hits my ears the sentiment would ring true.


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No .sig for me, I'm trying to quit.


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OfflineTRaNCeD
Pritch Man

Registered: 03/18/05
Posts: 38
Loc: Sniffin your coke
Last seen: 12 years, 11 months
Re: Drunken poem writing [Re: Entropic]
    #4043656 - 04/12/05 02:05 AM (13 years, 7 months ago)

Damn, if you wrote that when you were drunk, i wonder what one of your poems would be likeif you wrote i on acid. Good shit, respect the work


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