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OfflineTodcasil
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yourself
    #4043332 - 04/12/05 12:33 AM (12 years, 8 months ago)

do you have room
to keep one under your hair
is there space
in your mouth for the words
did you play the keys
an odd ring under your song
though you didnt sing
from your mouth no words

think of myself
design myself
display myself
delete myself


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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Re: yourself [Re: Todcasil]
    #4044762 - 04/12/05 10:21 AM (12 years, 8 months ago)

I like that, though I must say I liked the first stanza much more than the second.


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Acid doesn't give you truths; it builds machines that push the envelope of perception. Whatever revelations came to me then have dissolved like skywriting. All I really know is that those few years saddled me with a faith in the redemptive potential of the imagination which, however flat, stale and unprofitable the world seems to me now, I cannot for the life of me shake.

-Erik Davis


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Re: yourself [Re: OneMoreRobot3021]
    #4045078 - 04/12/05 12:22 PM (12 years, 8 months ago)

:thumbup: :sun:


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Re: yourself [Re: butterflydawn]
    #4047855 - 04/12/05 11:09 PM (12 years, 8 months ago)

its all a bit of evolution.

when i am manic, so are my poems :smile:


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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Re: yourself [Re: Todcasil]
    #4049097 - 04/13/05 06:38 AM (12 years, 8 months ago)

you guys are special... for some reason i feel ok posting my songs here.

usually i post my orginal drafts, the raw poems here... but when its time to sit down and make a melody, many things get changed.

i try to keep it as real as possibel to the original feeling, but sometimes its just impossible.

this one for sure, that last part would never fit smoothly into a song unless i was writing some industrial stuff :wink: hehe... but the first part is lovely.

thanks for  letting me share with you folks, it really means a lot to me.

:heart:


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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Re: yourself [Re: Todcasil]
    #4049237 - 04/13/05 07:57 AM (12 years, 8 months ago)

always nice to see your stuff here
keep them comin'
:smile:


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