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Upon First Sight
    #3784930 - 02/15/05 08:04 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

There, on the hill!
Beyond the coughing cloud of dust
Like a phoenix cast forth from the setting sun
A Silhouette moving near.

A graceful, bouncing lightness to Her step, She has come home and how our hearts leap upon first sight.

The ditch below Her; below Her white flowing gown, Her hair alive in the breeze; In the valley She left so long ago, where we toil heart-broken, minds numb from monotony; In the shit-brown ditch, though golden now in the fiery light of sunset; In that valley, forgotten by the gods of sympathy, by those of time, by those of purpose; In this ditch arise our hearts upon first sight.

We sing rejoicefully in one shared voice, the melodious, soulful voice of our ancestry, for She has returned, and the ever-watchful eye of the forgetful Deity(s) follows Her home.

Our souls are illuminated in spite of the falling night. The darkest regions, the hidden corners, cry to be touched, soothed, mended now, now that She has come.

O, fluttering dove against the gale, tonight we pray to you. Let Her stay, this time, let Her stay. Let Her not tire of this unworthy home, of the constant sound of scraping shovels. (We know not why we dig, but only that we must)

Let Her not become bored when the furnace fire in our hearts dulls and recedes from this awesome brightness with which it now glows, upon first sight.

Let Her smile, sweet dove, let Her stay.


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Re: Upon First Sight [Re: Senor_Doobie]
    #3785047 - 02/15/05 08:33 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

aaaack


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Re: Upon First Sight *DELETED* [Re: Senor_Doobie]
    #3785269 - 02/15/05 09:14 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

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Reason for deletion: Im sorry



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Re: Upon First Sight [Re: blink]
    #3785352 - 02/15/05 09:30 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

She is a metaphor


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Re: Upon First Sight [Re: Senor_Doobie]
    #3785489 - 02/15/05 09:54 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

a lovely metaphor.


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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Re: Upon First Sight [Re: Senor_Doobie]
    #3785926 - 02/15/05 10:56 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

you sure have a way with words sir doobs :thumbup:

hows your book coming along?


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Re: Upon First Sight [Re: wrestler_az]
    #3785961 - 02/15/05 10:59 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

Stagnent


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Re: Upon First Sight [Re: Senor_Doobie]
    #3785968 - 02/15/05 11:00 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

how come?


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Re: Upon First Sight [Re: wrestler_az]
    #3786136 - 02/15/05 11:24 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

It's just stuck. I have a clear idea of the end, just having a real hard time gettin there.

There's this vague part around the middle of the story that I was hoping would write itself when I got to it, but, it hasn't.


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Re: Upon First Sight [Re: Senor_Doobie]
    #3788564 - 02/16/05 11:11 AM (11 years, 9 months ago)

if it's anything like this swill, time to apply at Quizno's.


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