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adamj
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This Prayer (Acoustic), Need your input!
#3721322 - 02/02/05 08:29 PM (19 years, 17 days ago) |
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Well... I want to start playing at open mic nights etc. I've never played infront of people before so I am nervous about the whole ordeal. (singing... oh god) When I do, I think I am going to play this song.
What do you guys and gals think?
I am having a tough time putting lyrics to it... but I don't think the lyrics would be that important since the guitar would carry the whole song.
This is the short version btw. I think I'll record some lyrics and re-post and get more feedback. I don't know why I am so.. hesitant to perform...
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spores
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Re: This Prayer (Acoustic), Need your input! [Re: adamj]
#3722244 - 02/02/05 10:35 PM (19 years, 17 days ago) |
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yeah, I would just play it and not sing. ehhh, that's assuming I could actually sing well enough to try it solo in public .
it's kinda busy, I don't hear much room for vocals, unless you have some other parts in the long version that have less, ummm movement, know what I mean? it's hard to fit vox over a lot of the shit I come up with too, I'm working on singing and playing at the same time to try to fix that though. I can usually hit the notes, my voice just sucks and I have a really short range.
anyway good luck man, it sounds good , I'll be interested in hearing what you come up with for a vocal melody if you decide to do that.
DH
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Alobar
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Re: This Prayer (Acoustic), Need your input! [Re: spores]
#3724911 - 02/03/05 02:13 PM (19 years, 17 days ago) |
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Sounds wonderful. I can always tell a musician when s/he strives for grace and understands silence.
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delta9
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Re: This Prayer (Acoustic), Need your input! [Re: Alobar]
#3724937 - 02/03/05 02:20 PM (19 years, 17 days ago) |
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Can you record with more amplitude? It's very very very soft and I feel I missed some of the subtleties of your music. What I did get, sounded great, though.
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PinkFloydRocks
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Re: This Prayer (Acoustic), Need your input! [Re: delta9]
#3733043 - 02/04/05 10:33 PM (19 years, 15 days ago) |
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I think it's a really nice piece. Reminds me of classical gas. Keep up the good work. That would be a hard song to put lyrics to.
-------------------- "A man is a success if he gets up in the morning and gets to bed at night, and in between he does what he wants to do." -Bob Dylan "Time you enjoy wasting, was not wasted." -John Lennon "I am not only a pacifist but a militant pacifist. I am willing to fight for peace. Nothing will end war unless the people themselves refuse to go to war." -Albert Einstein
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