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something different i guess
    #3622407 - 01/13/05 07:24 AM (12 years, 7 months ago)

i write a l ot of poetry and dont mind sharing it with the whole board, but when i pen up a song i get a bit nervous. i wrote this last night. its even a little different from most of other songs, the way its nroke down is different... but i really like it. SO... you all should read it.

not looking for constructive critism here :\ it would break my heart.

peace



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dandy lions

vanilla bean sliding down the inside of her glass
a few hundred miles away from me
she has finished with her drink and now its time to get back
to the doldrums of the day

and the words she sent me
are still steeping in her head
lightly around me
her imagination swims
and curls around us
the image she has made today
is comforting her flesh and her grin

im still in pajamas but i couldnt try to care
a few hundred miles of cotton strings
i write you letters my thoughts are all in a mess
just like my hair and my speech

and the words ive pulled out
are writhing in there places
electric manuevers
to get to your face
so your eyes can drink them
the image i have strung for you
is warming up her flesh and her heart

lioness, i want you closer
lion i want you just as close
overlapping our mouths and tongues
giving in to something better


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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