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Liz
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thoughts
#3550539 - 12/27/04 09:20 PM (19 years, 3 months ago) |
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still haven't found the words, to say how I feel, It's so hard to believe that all this is real, Still I find myself asking, what did I do? to be lucky enough to wake up next to you? still scared deep down, to be hurt one more time, but you've stolen my heart, what a wonderful crime still baffled by how fast I was able to fall, one look in your eyes, and my problems seem small still get that feeling, whenever you're near, those butterflies inside, stifling my fear, still feels so right, when I'm in your arms, I know that I'm safe there, they shield me from harm still whenever you're here, I'm all laughter and smiles, and I can still feel your touch, across all these miles still incredulous, still happy, still looking forward to more, still my heart aches for you to walk back through my door.
-------------------- Remember, remember the fifth of November The gunpowder treason and plot. I see no reason why gunpowder treason Should ever be forgot.
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Todcasil
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Re: thoughts [Re: Liz]
#3550604 - 12/27/04 09:31 PM (19 years, 3 months ago) |
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its is a sad ending
i love poetry
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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Corporal Kielbasa
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Re: thoughts [Re: Liz]
#3552163 - 12/28/04 10:43 AM (19 years, 3 months ago) |
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It made me sad....
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Todcasil
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ifallapart has "the longing" you can tell
her poem is about searching the past and the future for happiness which makes it sad cause thats what so many of us do
i ifallapart
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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Corporal Kielbasa
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Re: thoughts [Re: Todcasil]
#3552189 - 12/28/04 10:53 AM (19 years, 3 months ago) |
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rrr yeah the longing puts a weird feeling right in your gut. kinda like the same feeling you get whenn you are actualy with that person. Just minus the person and its awkwerd having that feeling from a memory.
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Liz
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Re: thoughts [Re: ricochet]
#3552883 - 12/28/04 02:32 PM (19 years, 3 months ago) |
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I'm glad you guys took the time to read it. And I'm glad you seemed to enjoy it, that makes me happy. Most of what I write is pretty morbid/depressing...but I'm going to try to stay away from posting that stuff in here. Oh, and Todcasil Thanks for everything hun
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Re: thoughts [Re: Liz]
#3555849 - 12/29/04 03:26 AM (19 years, 3 months ago) |
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i know what you want to say but isnt it abit cliche i mean, how many of those poems are out there? its all the same.. we all know how it feels and we should accept it and live with it not bitch about it in teenage poetry :# read some kavafi.
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Re: thoughts [Re: grphish]
#3556528 - 12/29/04 08:21 AM (19 years, 3 months ago) |
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I say read some rumie.
and man I dont see you postin any poetry.
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Liz
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Re: thoughts [Re: grphish]
#3556557 - 12/29/04 08:37 AM (19 years, 3 months ago) |
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Quote:
we all know how it feels and we should accept it and live with it not bitch about it in teenage poetry :#
I wasn't bitching about anything...and the teenage poetry comment was entirely unnecessary. But thanks for your opinion.
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Todcasil
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Re: thoughts [Re: Liz]
#3557153 - 12/29/04 11:57 AM (19 years, 3 months ago) |
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i say learn to read people, were you going out of your way to make someone feel bad or ostracized? way to be mature about someones poetry/art/life.
pehaps instead of reading and mocking her poetry, you should write your own and see why your such a curmudgeon.
after all that, peace.
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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