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InvisibleLiz
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thoughts
    #3550539 - 12/27/04 11:20 PM (12 years, 4 months ago)

still haven't found the words, to say how I feel,
It's so hard to believe that all this is real,
Still I find myself asking, what did I do?
to be lucky enough to wake up next to you?
still scared deep down, to be hurt one more time,
but you've stolen my heart, what a wonderful crime
still baffled by how fast I was able to fall,
one look in your eyes, and my problems seem small
still get that feeling, whenever you're near,
those butterflies inside, stifling my fear,
still feels so right, when I'm in your arms,
I know that I'm safe there, they shield me from harm
still whenever you're here, I'm all laughter and smiles,
and I can still feel your touch, across all these miles
still incredulous, still happy, still looking forward to more,
still my heart aches for you to walk back through my door.
:heart:


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Remember, remember the fifth of November
The gunpowder treason and plot.
I see no reason why gunpowder treason
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Re: thoughts [Re: Liz]
    #3550604 - 12/27/04 11:31 PM (12 years, 4 months ago)

:frown:

its is a sad ending

i love poetry :heart:


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Re: thoughts [Re: Liz]
    #3552163 - 12/28/04 12:43 PM (12 years, 4 months ago)

It made me sad....


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Re: thoughts [Re: Corporal Kielbasa]
    #3552177 - 12/28/04 12:50 PM (12 years, 4 months ago)

ifallapart has "the longing" you can tell :frown:

her poem is about searching the past and the future for happiness which makes it sad cause thats what so many of us do :frown:

i :heart: ifallapart


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GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


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Re: thoughts [Re: Todcasil]
    #3552189 - 12/28/04 12:53 PM (12 years, 4 months ago)

rrr yeah the longing puts a weird feeling right in your gut. kinda like the same feeling you get whenn you are actualy with that person. Just minus the person and its awkwerd having that feeling from a memory.


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    #3552513 - 12/28/04 02:56 PM (12 years, 4 months ago)

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Re: thoughts [Re: ricochet]
    #3552883 - 12/28/04 04:32 PM (12 years, 4 months ago)

:grin:  I'm glad you guys took the time to read it.  And I'm glad you seemed to enjoy it, that makes me happy.  Most of what I write is pretty morbid/depressing...but I'm going to try to stay away from posting that stuff in here.
Oh, and  :heart: Todcasil 
Thanks for everything hun


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The gunpowder treason and plot.
I see no reason why gunpowder treason
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Re: thoughts [Re: Liz]
    #3555849 - 12/29/04 05:26 AM (12 years, 4 months ago)

i know what you want to say
but isnt it abit cliche i mean, how many of those poems are out there?
its all the same..
we all know how it feels and we should accept it and live with it
not bitch about it in teenage poetry :#


read some kavafi.


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Re: thoughts [Re: grphish]
    #3556528 - 12/29/04 10:21 AM (12 years, 4 months ago)

I say read some rumie.

and man I dont see you postin any poetry.


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Re: thoughts [Re: grphish]
    #3556557 - 12/29/04 10:37 AM (12 years, 4 months ago)

Quote:

we all know how it feels and we should accept it and live with it
not bitch about it in teenage poetry :#




I wasn't bitching about anything...and the teenage poetry comment was entirely unnecessary. But thanks for your opinion.


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The gunpowder treason and plot.
I see no reason why gunpowder treason
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Re: thoughts [Re: Liz]
    #3557153 - 12/29/04 01:57 PM (12 years, 4 months ago)

i say learn to read people, were you going out of your way to make someone feel bad or ostracized? way to be mature about someones poetry/art/life.

pehaps instead of reading and mocking her poetry, you should write your own and see why your such a curmudgeon.

after all that, peace.


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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