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InvisibleJohn
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Mushroom poem
    #3192404 - 09/28/04 07:22 PM (12 years, 2 months ago)

So we got to poetry in my literature class and we had to write a few poems, here's one about mushrooms i did, i thought it was decent especially since i'm not really a good poem writer, not as in-touch with my emotions as most good poets.

That magical auroa it casts,
surrounding it's leathery flesh,
such brillant purples and hints of gold,
it puts my mind to rest.

Just a few bites and I'm shown the light,
in an instinctual manner.
When I get out of line they take the time
to put my universe in order.

Contaning a world all of it's own,
incalculable diversity and regions unknown,
all from such a simple thing,
known as 4-OH-DMT.

Why is it there and for what reason,
this substance we call psilocybin?
Made for mans brain? You make the call,
or shall I ask my magic 8-ball?

If life seems boring, uneventful, drab,
spiritually and philosophically lacking,
Or need a corrective lens to focus your third eye,
look no further than the kingdom: fungi.

if you have any suggestions to make it better go for it, i like when people critize my writing. or if you have a shroomy poem post it here :stoned:


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Re: Mushroom poem [Re: John]
    #3192430 - 09/28/04 07:29 PM (12 years, 2 months ago)

Very nice John! :cool:


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Re: Mushroom poem [Re: John]
    #3192650 - 09/28/04 08:09 PM (12 years, 2 months ago)

:thumpup:

I'd like to give a suggestion but I'd probably end up taking away from it.


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Re: Mushroom poem [Re: John]
    #3192792 - 09/28/04 08:32 PM (12 years, 2 months ago)

shit that was awesome.


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Re: Mushroom poem [Re: John]
    #3193058 - 09/28/04 09:30 PM (12 years, 2 months ago)

I especially like the last stanza.  Good work!  :mushroom2:


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"Climb the mountains and get their good tidings.  Nature's peace will flow into you as sunshine flows into trees.  The winds will blow their own freshness into you, and the storms their energy, while cares will drop off like autumn leaves." - John Muir


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Re: Mushroom poem [Re: John]
    #3193411 - 09/29/04 12:32 AM (12 years, 2 months ago)

nice :stoned:


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Re: Mushroom poem [Re: John]
    #3194105 - 09/29/04 02:42 AM (12 years, 2 months ago)

:thumbup:


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Re: Mushroom poem [Re: Tyger]
    #3194187 - 09/29/04 03:04 AM (12 years, 2 months ago)

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Tyger said:
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