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OfflineTinTree
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A song I made
    #3158047 - 09/20/04 11:38 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

My first real song made in FruityLoops. I've been listening to it for the past few hours while making it, so I no longer have any idea how it sounds. Gimme some more opinions, suggestions, hate, whatever.
It's a work in progress.  :tongue:

EDIT:
Stripped-down, superior (I think) version


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Edited by TinTree (09/21/04 01:54 AM)


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Re: A song I made [Re: TinTree]
    #3158341 - 09/21/04 12:42 AM (12 years, 10 months ago)

um... well. i cant asy i liked it at all.
a lot of times its just goes really out of key. wrong notes all over the place. its just not interesting to me at all.

and the instruments used are pretty cheesy. it almost sounds like midi background music for a webpage.

sorry if im too critical.


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Re: A song I made [Re: plexus]
    #3158494 - 09/21/04 01:29 AM (12 years, 10 months ago)

Thanks for honesty... :shrug: I suspect the bells track I threw on top was too haphazardly done.


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Re: A song I made [Re: TinTree]
    #3158507 - 09/21/04 01:30 AM (12 years, 10 months ago)

Yeah dude, it just sounds like random clips put together on top of each other


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Re: A song I made [Re: Wolfe3001]
    #3158609 - 09/21/04 01:51 AM (12 years, 10 months ago)

Okay, I polished the bass to fit the piano, and dropped the cheezy improv MIDI bell-synth, did some re-arranging. Considering a vocal track to fill the void...
Will update link on first post in just a sec; please give another listen... it's immensely helpful to me  :thumbup: :sun:


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Re: A song I made [Re: TinTree]
    #3158884 - 09/21/04 03:00 AM (12 years, 10 months ago)

The lead's still are very badly out of key.

I'm really not triyng to be harsh here, but what do you know about musical theory?


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Re: A song I made [Re: Wolfe3001]
    #3162185 - 09/21/04 10:36 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

i think its the piano that sounds the cheesy-ist


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Re: A song I made [Re: plexus]
    #3163325 - 09/22/04 03:10 AM (12 years, 10 months ago)

Not bad. Reminded me of when I used to do piano recitals, back in the day... Not that thats a bad thing, it is just what came to my mind.


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Re: A song I made [Re: TinTree]
    #3165482 - 09/22/04 05:34 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

yeah towards the end i could hear some pretty blatantly out-of-tune notes, but overall for fruityloops that isn't a bad song at all..

most people make some stupid basic trance tune when they first load up FL, then gradually learn how to use it.. i can see you're at least trying :thumbup:


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