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rough draft of a song
    #3153192 - 09/19/04 02:23 PM (13 years, 4 days ago)

This is just a little piece I've been working on today and wanted some feedback on it. It's a draft! So there are little errors... but hell the draft sometimes sounds better than the final mix.

Link to page, big ass link to download from -- 1.1mb

thx


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Re: rough draft of a song [Re: adamj]
    #3153301 - 09/19/04 06:04 PM (13 years, 4 days ago)

I like the recorded guitar tone. It sounds nice.
You could probably go for a screen for your mic to help block wind & pops on the vocal track.

I'm really liking this guitar track!


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Re: rough draft of a song [Re: aje]
    #3153321 - 09/19/04 06:26 PM (13 years, 4 days ago)

a screen? my mike is a $30er. It has a metal screen like most mikes. But I'm assuming you mean different.

Thanks on the comment :wink:


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Re: rough draft of a song [Re: adamj]
    #3153348 - 09/19/04 06:49 PM (13 years, 4 days ago)

It's very simple and lo-fi and I like it for that reason.

Suggestions:

1) the "enjoy them too" bit goes on a tad too long
2) towards the end your singing seems to trail off a bit
3) don't worry about a pop shield- hold your hand in front of your mouth and make a "puh" sound. Move your hand up till you can't feel the air hit it. This is where your mic head should be- out of range of the air, but pointing at your mouth.

Look forward to hearing the final version!


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Re: rough draft of a song [Re: adamj]
    #3153440 - 09/19/04 08:11 PM (13 years, 4 days ago)

folk it up.

i like it.

do you have a tracking system?


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Re: rough draft of a song [Re: Todcasil]
    #3153450 - 09/19/04 08:15 PM (13 years, 4 days ago)

tracking system? like a 4-track? 8 track?

nah I don't. If that's what you mean.


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