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Offlinebigbadwolf
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Uhh... Songs I Wrote
    #3074958 - 08/31/04 07:16 PM (12 years, 9 months ago)

While I was high I got an urge to write songs.
I don't know anything about writing songs and haven't done it before so I dont't know if I messed up...
Tell me what you think:

As I fall down the stairs
and tumble from rocks
There's somebody home and nobody cares

Chorus:
You always say that you have it so bad
but you seem so blind that you can't understand
The's a million children sleeping outside
There's not a single person who hasn't told a lie
Still you won't even look
You won't even glance.

They break their bones everyday
Their last shred of hope is thrown away
All this just to feel like they pay.

Chorus

The ruins waste away and smolder
The smoke curls and slithers
A man is alone and not and colder

Chorus

A community of moss is left undisturbed
Not one soul ever notices
But it lives on


different song:

The mountain awaits
Lying in stillness
but completely awake

Chorus:
Looking around now I can see
the gate was always open for me
I just had to open door
and crawl on through

The cloud is watching
gliding through time
Its ideas hatching
reaching new heights without a climb

Chorus

The grandest boulder
The tiniest moss
All rest on another's shoulder
neither being the boss

Chorus


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Re: Uhh... Songs I Wrote [Re: bigbadwolf]
    #3075050 - 08/31/04 07:42 PM (12 years, 9 months ago)

you should change your title.
or at least make "________________________________" shorter.

do you have music to go with the lyrics?
either way, cool lyrics:D


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Offlinebigbadwolf
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Re: Uhh... Songs I Wrote [Re: funkymonk]
    #3075230 - 08/31/04 08:28 PM (12 years, 9 months ago)

I dont have any music to go with them but maybe soon. (I play bass)

Thanks though.


Edited by bigbadwolf (08/31/04 08:30 PM)


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Re: Uhh... Songs I Wrote [Re: bigbadwolf]
    #3075606 - 08/31/04 11:04 PM (12 years, 9 months ago)

if you write for yourself, there is no messing up.

the only single way to mess up lyrics/poetry is to write to make someone else happy at the expense of your own satisfaction.

youre songs are amatuer, but you are a poet none the less!

you mention moss in both songs?  did you ever think of combing lyrics to make a more complete song?  see if you like the way it sounds that way.

there is something about the second song that i like... im not quite sure what it is, but it is there.

keep up the good work!
remember, the more you write; the better you feel :smile:

peace and understanding...

Todcasil


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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Offlinebigbadwolf
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Re: Uhh... Songs I Wrote [Re: Todcasil]
    #3079220 - 09/01/04 08:39 PM (12 years, 9 months ago)

Yeah, I mentioned moss in both because I ate some mushrooms a few days ago and stared at moss colonies for the whole time.

Thanks man.


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