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He arises brushing off aeons of tribeorganicarians, it was not without a awesome alarm of being mountains strained the uprise releasing and destroying the oldest
on they fought for all was reeling in madness
the airs revolted till mountain struck a deal and the waters changed there ways for ever
sights never "seen" where overturned in a day
stories unheard dropped to the depths
or left completely to who knows whence
the spheretonalvaaraetions have gone to the unreachable place, oh! but never to see the splendour..
..calculations in inumrable dimensions blending sight thought and feel and birthing the logifaithfollers who still weep there parting.
Though through there sacrifice the channel is never shut.
In ever inventing moments fury unimaginable with power uncontrollable throbbed a single final note
that frozen in gravity and time rained like gentle fire into the absortion of her healing surfaces.
To this world Nep awoke. Feeling no wounds he was content.
An echo subsided in him falling away a sense of unknown loss and sorrow.
He bowed his head with all the life in him he began to sink, deeper and deeper as his eyes shut. In the world he called iz he felt ice hot pangs that moaned the arrogance and self loathing of something he knew not.. breaking down no thought flowed but pain ...complete loss...
but what Glory is this?
a new found strength?
the word itself seemed knew.
he screamed it.
a tremor shot his spine..limboticsiezures of unidentified power shot through him..
his mind came alive with language ..neh, Languae s ..concepts basic yet infinetily complex filled his knew mm-m-i
miinnn.. Mind! yes he knew the word!!
identity!! sweet being!
but who was he??
the power(s) surged back and forth
the ~other seemed to call him back
no time to think..as dualistic reasoning words branched off into unstoppable powers of adaptability and he dreamed the Honor into being
yes that was it!
he loved iz!
^!^!!!!!!!!!! aHhHh... the pride was nearly broken in one blow.
much worse than before..the pain had faces and fractals of hate..venomios concepts hinting at his knew found being seduced with uncontrolled pride and overtured pleasure he wished nothing now
all thought betrayed him
reaching to the deepest he came up empty and begged the knew one for an end the undalating void of evolving malice and deep fearing fury
perverted his mind to thoughts of betrayal and fear...no what was this ...a--nnGER!!!!! HATE!!!!!
ennd to ennd gasped and wise prayed a prayer letting go...
as the concept birthed it seemed to Nep that time stopped..... another attack?... his bitter heart belowed.. but he was drunk .
A sudden spell
had taken him
the verse of a child..
the oldest womens story
the cry of men of honor
dying for there lovers
the childs sacrifice....
echoing louder and louder
becoming a theme in its own
Nep iz... .. .. .. .. ..
(by the way, nice writing. a few grammar issues here and there, some 'flow' things.. like a gem found in the depths of the earth: shining yet rough around the edges. keep at it. either drop this piece, or keep on it. show us your deepest meanings of the inspiration behind this.)