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InvisiblePapaverS
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le col?opt?re...
    #2856243 - 07/04/04 02:03 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)



She opened her mouth to speak, but the only sounds that came out were scratching noises: like the legs of a beetle scraping against the sides of a discarded plastic shopping bag while desperately trying to escape.


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les porcs flottants... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856252 - 07/04/04 02:05 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)



And as she stopped playing, the last notes of the Path?tique hung in the air like barrage balloons, which strangely appeared as luminous tethered pigs looming over the gray coastline on this bleak sunday morning: the discord of war, imminent.


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la pluie folle... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856315 - 07/04/04 02:31 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)



The deluge slid efluently and suddenly out of the payne?s gray sky, as did her memories, on that long and empty beach; her heels in hand; her nylon-clad feet wet with sand.


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passion au repos... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856387 - 07/04/04 03:15 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)



While he droned about, "the limited semiotics of non-representational painting being their inherent strength in social position," she found herself mentally planning the details of brunch at the cafe: turkish coffee; ossetra caviar; seckel pear salad; brandade of lobster with poached egg; apple and brandy raisin pie; and Veuve Clicquot mimosas. The tickets folded neatly in her Prada handbag.


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tomber... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856428 - 07/04/04 03:41 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)



She was loath to ask: the expression on his face revealing more than she wanted to know. Her stomach unsettled and twisting at her fate; the high-rise backdrop of Tokyo an alien brandscape.


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noir sur noir... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856488 - 07/04/04 04:13 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)



The shadow of her smile haunted his memories like a dark lighthouse on a rocky midnight shore: his travels having irrevocably cast him adrift from all that was his from his past: his memories having become the very essence of fluttering black on black; like bats in a cave.


*Art: Ad Reinhardt, "Abstract Painting: Black Cross"


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Re: noir sur noir... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856510 - 07/04/04 04:20 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

I like this thread.


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Re: noir sur noir... [Re: kosmic_charlie]
    #2856550 - 07/04/04 04:38 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

I'm screwing around with trying to write little one and two sentence stories. A little self-imposed writing exercise for shits and giggles... :wink:


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invahissant... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856553 - 07/04/04 04:39 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)



He felt; as if; the serpent in the garden of her mind.


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Re: le col?opt?re... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856569 - 07/04/04 04:47 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

Very thought provoking and insightful. Good stuff, Papaver! :laugh: :thumbup:


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Re: invahissant... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856583 - 07/04/04 04:52 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

You're a good writer. Did you ever get anything published?


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Re: invahissant... [Re: kosmic_charlie]
    #2856667 - 07/04/04 05:30 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

Thanks. :smile:

Published? Only in college literary reviews and stuff. Back in college I used to write some poetry (to get laid :wink: j/k) and art criticism for the school paper, but that was about it. I was pretty much a painter, which is still my primary focus.

I have been thinking of trying to write some short stories lately, and so I'm kind of mentally gearing up for that, but finishing a complete, well-written, short story is sort of a daunting task for me -- I have several started, but none even close to being finished. So, we'll see how it goes... :wink:


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Re: le col?opt?re... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856668 - 07/04/04 05:30 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

le col?opt?re = the beatle


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I'm floating in the sea of stars,
I'm drifting away from the shore
I will be lost in the dream when the dark days come
But I will make the time run backwards and
I'll make the stars shine again


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Re: invahissant... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856674 - 07/04/04 05:34 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

Keep up the good work. You have such a way with words I'm sure you could get something published. Also, you should post some of your paintings if you have a digi. I'd like to see them.


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le crabe ali?n?... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856676 - 07/04/04 05:35 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)



Grabbing the dungeness crab firmly by the legs; he squeezed; neatly bifurcating it across its ventral axis -- splaying it apart to a resemblance not unlike the parting of aroused labia -- and as he eagerly tongued its recesses for the sweet meat, as if to pleasure an alien beast, he listened to the octogenarian babble of the next table, and vowed to himself, that next time he would bring a copy of Waugh to the beach, and not Ballard.


*Revision History: replaced "back" with "belly" because it was incorrect; then replaced "belly" with "ventral axis" to sound more Ballardian.


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Re: le crabe ali?n?... [Re: Papaver]
    #2856747 - 07/04/04 06:15 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

Neat stuff. I'm down with anyone that can use the word bifurcating. :craven:


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Gotische Grausigkeit? [Re: Papaver]
    #2858094 - 07/05/04 05:41 AM (12 years, 10 months ago)



Having carefully crept up behind her (after considerable years of pursuit), and now, clinging to her like a lost shadow: her dark secret was about to spring up, and spill her soul...


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