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InvisibleMOTH
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Monster
    #2723288 - 05/24/04 04:33 PM (13 years, 4 months ago)

A random poem I wrote. I wasn't exactly in the best of moods.

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A curdled blackness in my stomach
An ache and a hurt familiar to my heart
It spirals out to claim me in a living death
A scream catches itself in my throat
Panic boils inside of me, seeking release
Intolerable anger is hidden but must be satisfied
My fingers crawl towards the glinting metal of sanctuary
Mine. All mine
My silver savior glides in a wake of crimson
I recognize this as my true self
My security
What can I be if not my true self?
Nothing.
The answer is nothing.
I am a monster worth killing.


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Re: Monster [Re: MOTH]
    #2723581 - 05/24/04 05:40 PM (13 years, 4 months ago)

That's beautiful and tragic. Mirrors my own feelings of the past 2 days...


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Re: Monster [Re: MOTH]
    #2723688 - 05/24/04 06:03 PM (13 years, 4 months ago)

I thought it felt kind of.. I'm not sure what exactly, perhaps a little too literal for my taste is all.

But I really like the last line.

Edit: I don't think "literal" is the right word for what I meant.. but I can't figure out a better way to describe it; I will get back to you.


Edited by JacquesCousteau (05/24/04 06:05 PM)


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