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Offlinestefan
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2 New songs
    #2722120 - 05/24/04 11:57 AM (14 years, 28 days ago)

Download them from my website (FAST download) and tell me what you think

titles:
In the Supermarket
What is our destination

www.grimoire-music.tk

maybe you'll find other songs fom me you haven't heard yet :cool:


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Offlinestefan
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Re: 2 New songs [Re: stefan]
    #2731729 - 05/26/04 12:25 PM (14 years, 26 days ago)

ok, you lazy guys, here are ths links :tongue:

In the supermarket

What is our destination?


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Re: 2 New songs [Re: stefan]
    #2732087 - 05/26/04 02:24 PM (14 years, 26 days ago)

In the Supermarket-
I really love the coming-together of the beat, sort of define each sound and make it form over slow period of time.  MMW can do that well, apparently so can you :wink:  Your bass sound is tight too, fits the beat quite well.  Your general mood is well put together too, kinda funky breaks.  The only thing I'd constructively criticize is that it somehow sounds very... midi, i guess. That and the lack of an alternate voice.  The ~acid lead that comes in later is cool, but is concerned with the rhythm rather than a complimentary voice, if that makes sense.

What is our destination?
The flute run is awesome, I almost want to hear it more as a feature.  Your beat is cool, a little disjunct, but styly in that way.  The pads sound cool, but sopme don't flow together as well as others. Although the lead sound that appears more than once fits this tune very well. I like it, brah


I'm all about constructive criticism, I think it helps a ton more than "Hey cool song!"  I haven't reached nearly where I want to be as a musician, so I'm pretty hard on myself too :wink:  I hope you take this helpfully, rather than knocking your songs.  I like em, and your style. But criticism can only make you better :smile:

You ever listen to Kruder and Dorfmeister, or Peace Orchestra? Your style is similar, also to Gus Gus, Wagon Christ, ~B. Fleischmann sorta.


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Offlinestefan
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Re: 2 New songs [Re: Blastrid]
    #2732259 - 05/26/04 03:00 PM (14 years, 26 days ago)

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I'm all about constructive criticism.......  But criticism can only make you better




very tru, I know what you mean. so, thanks for the critique :wink: :laugh:

what exactly do you mean by this: " That and the lack of an alternate voice." ?
you mean a lead melody or something or an actual voice.
This song was supposed to sound a little 'cold' and to compensate the coldness I made the bass warm (if this makes sense :smirk:)

oh yeah,  you seem to know/hear everything good and put it well into words :thumbup:


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