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i don't want to see your hands...help
    #2692580 - 05/17/04 08:04 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

something I experienced two days ago that changed my life, it can only be told about in a poem I wrote

thought I had a life
that I had a strife
but something about the situation didn't look right
Now I see day as night
comming out, i think I did alright
it was a very scary site

the place lit up like a hot pepper
shots in all directions, didn't know whether
I was alive or dead
left on a could be death bed
life, fragile as a bird's plume
could be torn to shreds soon

the park was the scene of dissing
and all I heard was "DROP"

pop pop pop

not comprehension, I got up when I heard cops
but the fear didn't stop
state of shock

at the park drinking, it was the weekend
I heard the cops talking but I didn't hear what they were speaking
this and that, that and this
still in shocked from the party that was dissed
looking at the bullet hole that barely missed

inches...distance my only friend
between staying and end

this isn't depressing
just mind compression
a level of appreication of living and its progression
but i there's still a confession

of what I should and shouldnt do
go strapped and pull through
to find where my buddy has disappeared to
it's been a couple days, buddy I miss you

this thing is a dance, of death and life
don't want to see your hands, where's that knife?
or gun...should I run and stay behind
or get involved with a nine?

not my normal self today, nor can I be
fighting myself internally
a passion burning deep
life's price is steep
when bullets rain in sheets
who do you keep?

it could have been over, being stress out
looking for the best route
one bullet in, another out
but I am happy to be alive,
this is just another shout

Annnnnnd I had a light saber and my friend was there and I said "you look like an indian" and he said "you look like satan" and he found a stick and a rock and he named the rock ooga booga and he named the stick Stick and we both thought that was pretty funny. We got eaten alive by mosquitos but didn't notice til the next day. I stepped on some glass while wading in the swamp and cut my foot open, didn't bother me til the next day either....yeah it was a good time, ended the night by buying some liquor for minors and drinking nips and going to he diner and eating chicken fingers, and then I went home and went to bed.---senior doobie

Edited by kaiowas (05/17/04 08:16 PM)

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Re: i don't want to see your hands...help [Re: kaiowas]
    #2692673 - 05/17/04 08:29 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

usually i wince when people post poetry on here.
This was really good.

SOunds like a whacky experience man. Peace

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