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Registered: 06/07/02
Posts: 1,413
Loc: Gulf Coast
some poetry ive written for u to read(if u care to)
    #2682554 - 05/15/04 03:43 PM (13 years, 11 months ago)

The Storm:

The riders on the storm
Thunder and lightning as you mourn
No treat could very well seem so sweet
Much rather bitter in the swirl of cold breeze
Reflection of your eyes in shallow pools of blood
You can't see as it's yours when you feel a gentle thud
Vision gone as all hopeful possibilities secede
Forever into the darkness soaked deeply with greed
Souls riding on the grey folded wings of a storm
As the shapes of stars and spiral dialations begin to form
Shadows on the sun begin to become undone
On the ground around you as the electricity in the sky
Takes hold and justifiable gusts toss you aside
For to them they want you to abide

Yet to your feet you go by disagreement of others
You see what you want and if it can't be reached
Only to you it seems to bother
And the peak to that mountain looks icily sweet
White and cold like cream of ice
Up it you climb to a chilling drum beat
As the apex nears, as does the storm
All your greatest fears, begin to take form
Tossing and turning
Bolders and glaciers fly by as a falcon
At top speed down from this miraculous formation
It appears you see a degradation in its integration
But looking back will result in failure
Or an uncostly dying soul from which nothing can take hold
Nothing can gain
Nothing can lose
Only you are the one to choose

This interdependance isn't working
As unifying two may prove to be a loss
But doesn't it feel great to seem for souls to cross
Of which matters most integrity or intellect
Dialating pupils show cause for intricate dialect
Perpetuating this outburst of taboo chaos
You try to stop but your attempts only cause more of
From your inability to leave alone
And mind your own
This mushroom tophat from the apex has grown
Forgotten mission from the thoughts above
Fall away as the head of a bitten dove
With a bloody glove and serratted teeth
This open-eyed native tries not to be officious
As those around only cause that to become more vicious

Every foothold slips and breaks away underneath that lonesome fool
Determination keeps him from returning to that bloody pool
As days pass not an inch has been scaled
More or less negativity has seemingly prevailed
It can't really be if reaquaintance with those past events wasn't made
Still through the storm the top cannot be seen and hopes seem frayed
In this native's ear a voice speaks his eulogy
And yet he has an epiphany
Death seems more accompanying than a return to the past
But forfeit is not an option
That storm has to pry my off of my mountain

:potleaf: :tendshroom: :potleaf:

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Registered: 06/07/02
Posts: 1,413
Loc: Gulf Coast
Re: some poetry ive written for u to read(if u care to) [Re: misterogerz]
    #2682568 - 05/15/04 03:47 PM (13 years, 11 months ago)

You Don't Fall

Into the night we go
Moon shining bright we know
Who's not so rightly profound
All of the music is becoming unsound
As you notice all of your limbs are bound
Right down to the ground

When the fire in the moon
Rolls down the hills like thunderheads
Rolling like wheels
The embodiment of love
Shows just how lightly we flow
Like the wings of the dove
I'd like you to know
So to you i must show

Then you stare at the sun
With illusory rings on your neck
Your mind is a scatter
But you shouldn't worry a matter
There's a monkey on your back
We'd like to attack
We think his name is jack
This being's no fool
Before he must we attack

The roads seem uneven or something like that
When all you can do is wonder where all it's at
Then it's time to wander the desert this day
Forever it is in a seeming way
In a conscious play
You notice the time not an hour's gone by
Then you think for surely we all will die
Thinking this thought
That you thought that you knew
Forgetting and remembering parts
All maybe of that which is blue

An illusionary solution fills the backs of your eyes
An all you can do is stare at the skies
Replaced by a fractallating black hole
With an entity unknown
Eyes in the skies looking down for you
Knowing they want you too
Ground breaks to fall away
Floats then falls like a gigantic wall
Seeming the night so bright
Fire is in all sight
But u do not fall
At all

succeeding session:

you think you know the question?
are you sure you can tell
when it was that your holy soul fell?

an answer would be fine
almost as great as a good elegant wine

but i think you still don't know...
You won't fall

:potleaf: :tendshroom: :potleaf:

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Registered: 04/03/02
Posts: 1,197
Loc: bottom of the noob barrel
Re: some poetry ive written for u to read(if u care to) [Re: misterogerz]
    #2683755 - 05/15/04 10:02 PM (13 years, 11 months ago)

I like the second and 5th stanza's of the second poem.

The first one needs some trimming.

I know what he wants: a drag of smooth tobbacco blended with the finest Turkish Turkweed. Here, have a toke on me you dumb beast.

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