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Offlinepsikooz
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Check out my music please!
    #2551509 - 04/12/04 03:49 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

I play guitar and i made a song called "Beautiful sunny day". I suggest you check it out.

All pretty much done in one take.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/psikoozbebopmusic.htm

check out beautiful sunny day, the other ones are crap.

please post comments and reactions.


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Re: Check out my music please! [Re: psikooz]
    #2551701 - 04/12/04 04:33 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

it sounds like you have some potential, you just need to organize your thoughts a little bit better. some of your riffs, that sound like there layered over another guitar just dont fit right.

"id rather hear a one note guitar solo that steve vai anyday"
-half japanese

thats sooo true, when you bust out those big insano riffs, they cant just come out of nowhere...they have to be built up to. you need to work around a central theme for a solo, even crazy shit like hendrix the whole time he's soloing you can hear the influence on his note selection from the entire song up to that point. little voice turn arounds and lines and chord changes manifest into a slur of beautifull madness.

also, for the style your shooting for i think the distortion is a little rough, you need something more silky smooth like a blues distortion with more treble emphasis and softer clipping.

i dont mean any of this in an insulting way. i like to help musicians prosper. constructive criticism is the best.

what are you using to produce this?

~JSlice~


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Re: Check out my music please! [Re: angryjslice]
    #2551706 - 04/12/04 04:51 PM (12 years, 10 months ago)

thanks man. Yeah i just did it all improvised So theres no premeditation in the music. Im getting better everyday, i just gotte keep working at it. And about the riffs, yeah i got to work on wokring around specfic notes so it all flows together. Next one i make ill structure it better, and maybey write some of the riffs down.

Thanks for the contructive critisism.

Im miking my amp, and using Cool EDit


Edited by psikooz (04/12/04 04:52 PM)


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Re: Check out my music please! [Re: psikooz]
    #2552978 - 04/13/04 01:57 AM (12 years, 10 months ago)

I agree with what was said above.  the backing track is alright (how'd you make it?), but the guitar stuff didn't really do anything for me.  Not the worst effort I've heard though :smile:

I'm all for quick playing, but it's gotta be melodic.  That's the toughest part about it, anyone can learn to wank around on some scales, or even without the scales :tongue:.  But matching your phrases with the chord progressions and using the scales(conciously or not) to make memorable melodies is where so many fail.  I'm guilty of this a lot as well (the pointless "musical" rambling), but I'm working on it too.  It's a pretty bad habit to get into and really doesn't help you much in learning to play well.  It helps me to think of leads as a song within a song, they should have a logical beginning, middle and conclusion, rather than just being a random assortment of guitar licks.  Keep working on it, it'll pay off eventually :smile:

DH


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Re: Check out my music please! [Re: spores]
    #2553032 - 04/13/04 02:15 AM (12 years, 10 months ago)

THANK YOU! :mushroom2: :mushroom2: :biggrin: :sun: :grin:


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