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Offlinexbloodwhipx

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Rate my rap
    #25050288 - 03/08/18 08:54 PM (3 years, 2 months ago)

Everyone else is doing it I guess


Its meant to go to this beat
https://www.youtube.com/watch?app=desktop&persist_app=1&noapp=1&v=xc_P2Dy3mhc

Its a cold night tryna catch a feelin,
its a cold night tryna catch a feelin,

Its a cold night tryna catch a feelin,
fight the stds with penicillin,
tina momma leg spread,
homie on the side head,
starin at that ass bet,
tryna get his dick wet, throwin 1s,
momma sweat like bo flex, makin funds,
workin for a livin in this coldness,
hold this Pole for a po' (poor) check,
needin money for bail,
her son locked up and he headed for hell,
she need that gaup to get him outta jail free,
so she let homie hit it raw see,
so he stuck it into her ball deep,
now momma knocked up on top of it all,
and her whole world is soon set to fall,

Its a cold night tryna catch a feelin,
its a cold night tryna catch a feelin,

Its a dark world tryna make a killin,
spread the stds, no forgivin,
tina alive and she barely livin,
tina alive but her world a prison,
momma couldnt afford to keep her livin,
momma couldnt afford to keep her livin
so she put her up for grabs,
never knew her fuckin dad,
fast foward 18 years,
now tina spread her ass, tina givin head,
tina pussy open, tina knows devotion,
to the highest bidder, you aint gotta bid alot,
but dont fuck with her pimp, or you might end up shot,
tina on the adderall, movin up to meth,
suck it like a cock, smoke fills her breath,
years go by, tina creepin up on death, thoughts of suicide,
crippled in addiction, not enough money,
asking gods permission, just to end it all,
she fall on her knees while she lick on some balls,
homie mean muggin like he 8 feet tall,
shove it down her throat while he smackin her ass,
tina start chokin but he wont let her gasp,
pulls out the gat,
puts it to her head,
pulls the trigger BLAW now tina dead

Its a dark night streets full of killers
its a dark night streets full of killers


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Invisibleplasma

Registered: 09/17/08
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Re: Rate my rap [Re: xbloodwhipx]
    #25050401 - 03/08/18 09:43 PM (3 years, 2 months ago)

Does any of this come from real life experiences?

I feel like a rap is pointless unless it has some kind of personal vibe from the artist


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Re: Rate my rap [Re: plasma] * 1
    #25050412 - 03/08/18 09:49 PM (3 years, 2 months ago)

Trying too hard to be dark IMO


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Re: Rate my rap [Re: plasma]
    #25050438 - 03/08/18 10:07 PM (3 years, 2 months ago)

Quote:

plasma said:
Does any of this come from real life experiences?

I feel like a rap is pointless unless it has some kind of personal vibe from the artist




Deltron 3030 proves you wrong.


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Offlinexbloodwhipx

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Re: Rate my rap [Re: plasma]
    #25050441 - 03/08/18 10:10 PM (3 years, 2 months ago)

Quote:

plasma said:
Does any of this come from real life experiences?

I feel like a rap is pointless unless it has some kind of personal vibe from the artist



Of course not, its called "storytelling" for a reason. Artists do it all of the time. As an example, do you think immortal technique really raped and killed a woman on top of a building? No, he even said so in an interview, yet he writes excellent stories.


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Re: Rate my rap [Re: xbloodwhipx]
    #25050445 - 03/08/18 10:11 PM (3 years, 2 months ago)

:fire:


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Invisibleplasma

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Re: Rate my rap [Re: plasma]
    #25050466 - 03/08/18 10:23 PM (3 years, 2 months ago)

Quote:

plasma said:
Does any of this come from real life experiences?

I feel like a rap is pointless unless it has some kind of personal vibe from the artist



No he doesn’t

I said that it’s how I feel


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Offlinexbloodwhipx

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Re: Rate my rap [Re: plasma]
    #25050474 - 03/08/18 10:28 PM (3 years, 2 months ago)

Please look at my rating i feel like an ass :sad:


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Invisibleplasma

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Re: Rate my rap [Re: xbloodwhipx]
    #25050479 - 03/08/18 10:30 PM (3 years, 2 months ago)

I did, it’s all good bro
I revised yours as well with a response
My bad


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Re: Rate my rap [Re: plasma]
    #25050482 - 03/08/18 10:31 PM (3 years, 2 months ago)

Your good haha i was the one being a dick, thanks for the forgiveness :thumbup: :hug:


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