Home | Community | Message Board


Magic-Mushrooms-Shop.com
Please support our sponsors.

General Interest >> Music, Art, and Media

Welcome to the Shroomery Message Board! You are experiencing a small sample of what the site has to offer. Please login or register to post messages and view our exclusive members-only content. You'll gain access to additional forums, file attachments, board customizations, encrypted private messages, and much more!

Jump to first unread post. Pages: 1
Offlinesuperfine
Driter

Registered: 02/19/02
Posts: 170
Loc: My Home Roams
Last seen: 11 years, 7 months
New Drug Lyrics Of Mine!
    #2482526 - 03/30/04 02:59 AM (13 years, 2 days ago)

This is actually the first song I have written out in its entirety. I have many song pieces lying around in scraps around my room but this one event really sparked my write juice. I have most of the guitar and bass lines figured out unfortunately I do not have a way to record onto my computer. I am just looking for some feedback, I realize its not amazing. I am worried the song seems a little to ?mainstream style? which is not my intention at all. The two syllable lines at the end of each are yelled quickly. So please tell me straight up what you don?t like about it and why. Especially tell me if any part/rhymes seem cliche
Its called ?My Old Friend?, one, two, one, two, three, four...

What caused this in you?
Ya used to be a hotty
I wanted you for that body
You opened the door
Your Coked!

Quit McDonalds
Drop out of school
Move downtown with a fool
Crumbled apartment of unrest
Smoke Meth!

Chorus:
Still he claims
I?m gunna be rich
I know it someday
I?ll find a way, he says
As he peddles me
Two hits of acid, five bucks
(five bucks, my luck! slideup five bucks)

I don?t trust my van
On your street
You tell me to take a seat
On your lazyboy
Its Ripped!

Bags under your eyes
Boyfriends gunna pull a knife
Take my change and my life
Such a nervous twitch
He?s Wired!

Chorus

Your roommate walks in
Slut clean from the shower
She?ll sell me some powder
Stomped on like gum
Coke Whore!

Baby carriage on the lawn
Whatever I want you?ll scam for me
In this tiny room with a busted T.V.
There?s bugs in the beds
Crack House!

Chorus

Waiting for dealers is always hard
Their bus was late to arrive
Quick deal, speed walk out of this dive
Pocket full of pharmaceuticals
Fuckin A!


--------------------
Go through the orange yesterday

I watched intently for a while to both sides, infront of me and behind me.
I was impressed to learn there was another way to look... UP!
More impressive still was the fact that there were beautiful stars in this direction
Most amazing fact of all was the prospect of another direction when I was done with up. DOWN! Which, based on the feel through my toes would be a fine sandy beach!


Post Extras: Print Post  Remind Me! Notify Moderator
Jump to top. Pages: 1

General Interest >> Music, Art, and Media

Similar ThreadsPosterViewsRepliesLast post
* a story of mine, do any of you think its any good? ZippoZM 484 7 01/31/05 04:23 PM
by PeyoteZen
* non lyrical electro? king_cobra 1,465 12 01/18/06 06:02 PM
by champ
* Favorite song lyrics catalyst777 687 8 10/17/03 02:26 PM
by seraphim
* Looking up lyrics to songs... fazdazzle 683 5 01/17/08 04:49 AM
by Viveka
* Lyric writing tips. Phishe 1,295 7 08/03/06 06:25 PM
by FGL
* Interesting Lyrics howardroark 653 7 04/11/08 12:31 PM
by howardroark
* radiohead and drugs
( 1 2 all )
BrAiN 2,952 29 04/03/05 09:33 PM
by Yrtlzmo
* Mars Volta and psychedelic lyrics Polyrhythmanaut 1,581 19 08/28/07 10:05 AM
by Random Patterns

Extra information
You cannot start new topics / You cannot reply to topics
HTML is disabled / BBCode is enabled
Moderator: Middleman, automan, sui, DividedQuantum
281 topic views. 0 members, 1 guests and 4 web crawlers are browsing this forum.
[ Toggle Favorite | Print Topic | Stats ]
Search this thread:
SoulSpeciosa Kratom
Please support our sponsors.

Copyright 1997-2017 Mind Media. Some rights reserved.

Generated in 0.027 seconds spending 0.004 seconds on 13 queries.