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Offlineorion
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Letting go
    #2442173 - 03/17/04 08:02 AM (12 years, 8 months ago)

falling into your arms, this pain so familiar
taking strange comfort in the solitude it brings
sinking fast into my depression, no will left to resist this
in the corners of my mind

pull your pins out of me
my one desire, set me free
don't need your hooks inside of me
let me go, release me

your face, it haunts my dreams
holding me back inside
locked into this torment
no escaping it this time
driving the wedge of seperation
that pulls us closer still
to the blinding pain
in your embrace
i'll feel

pull these pins out of me
my one desire, set me free
don't need these hooks inside of me
let me go....
let go of me...


What do you think, should she let me go?
:tongue:


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OfflineJacquesCousteau
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Re: Letting go [Re: orion]
    #2442301 - 03/17/04 09:08 AM (12 years, 8 months ago)

Sounds more like you need to take some initiative and let HER go.

edit: Unless this is about someone you've already ended the relationship with.. in which case, disregard previous statement.


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Offlineorion
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Re: Letting go [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #2443197 - 03/17/04 02:08 PM (12 years, 8 months ago)

Well Jacques, I ended this relationship, but her soul is still with me, so to speak. That's as close as I can get to describing it anyways...
I need her essence to let me go, so I can get on with my life, you see?


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Re: Letting go [Re: orion]
    #2443693 - 03/17/04 04:06 PM (12 years, 8 months ago)

i like your style of poetry, it reminds me of my own.


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Re: Letting go [Re: orion]
    #2443926 - 03/17/04 05:32 PM (12 years, 8 months ago)

While I do see, at the same time.. unless she's actually physically imposing upon your life in some way, you may still be the one who needs to let go.

If she is imposing upon your life in any way (even if it's just once a month she sends an email that says "please take me back, I will die without you") then you are right, she needs to let go.. these "bits of string" so to speak will definitely tie you down until they are eliminated completely.

However, if you're saying that you don't see her anymore (at all), but you still feel that her "soul" is with you, that is more like you holding onto part of her than vice versa.


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