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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: remake] * 3
    #23943192 - 12/20/16 11:51 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Eternal Recurrence


Affirmation if you please
Generating will with ease
Positive, that is the way
To follow truth in light of day

Return forever to the start
Unfolding strong would be the smart
Path to take, inside an hour
Pack it thick, power shall flower

If the opportunity were to arise
Do not dare alter some reprise
But bravely, strongly face the day
Refuse to pursue a weaker way

Infinity breeds eternal recurrence
A stronger soul must have endurance
Plausible, yes, in fact it is
But that is not a point of his

The idea keeps steam for its elegance
And prudence knows its precise relevance
A man must live as if today were it
With fortitude, saying yes – and grit

So we have the utmost strength
To live, and work, and breathe – at length
To do it differently, again
Would be to lose – one wants to win


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum]
    #23943197 - 12/20/16 11:53 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

So much good work here.
Wish we could do a collab book


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse] * 1
    #23944619 - 12/20/16 09:02 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Ha, good one DQ. I actually laughed out loud in a moment of insight!

Inspire Heraclitean, philosopher's muse!

...The river I stepped into once, is gone, for it is this, now this,
As lightning courses through all, it cannot miss.
Beings on hills aflame, the wise hold no wrists,
For there's no echo to this moment, when One, all, is.


Edited by Kurt (12/21/16 02:10 PM)


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Kurt] * 1
    #23946997 - 12/21/16 06:41 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

False hopes.
Enough ropes.
Heightened learning.
Equality burning.

Structure defining.
Societal redisigning.
Educational levers.
Elite deceiver.

Basic rights.
Fundamental fights.
Children purposed.
Motives surfaced.

Private public.
Sickening trick.
Glaringly scary.
Societal tick.

Fairness hidden.
Horizons forbidden.
No more.
Without less.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 3
    #23947307 - 12/21/16 08:25 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Eternal flame
High beyond the sky, you fly
Igniting the shadows
With illumination that you bestow...
You have earned your slumber tonight
For where would we be,
Devoid of the warmth of thee?
Without photosynthesis,
To forge the air we breathe?
You need no creed, no dogma
Or religious propaganda
To seed the feed we need
To proceed into conscious beings...
Our symbiosis makes us one
You are the brightest of the stars
You are our cosmic candle
You are our life-sustaining Sun

:mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Reprobate420]
    #23947312 - 12/21/16 08:27 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

not only was that awesome, but i totally rapped that shit to some Taeko Ohnuki - 4:00 AM---- the scansion was pitch perfect too.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
    #23947324 - 12/21/16 08:31 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

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akira_akuma said:
not only was that awesome, but i totally rapped that shit to some Taeko Ohnuki - 4:00 AM---- the scansion was pitch perfect too.




That's awesome! I am glad that you liked it. Cheers :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Reprobate420]
    #23947401 - 12/21/16 09:12 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

yeah man :cheers:

though i must say, it's a mere tress of the completion that i'm sure you can achieve, O Reprobate420.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
    #23947418 - 12/21/16 09:23 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Thank you, kind sir... and I agree that it can definitely be improved upon and expanded.... it was written in haste... sometimes i just get the urge to write something for the sake of it lol :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] * 1
    #23947428 - 12/21/16 09:29 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

I recently compiled a bit of my poetry and posted it onto a blog if you care to check it out... there are some with similar themes you may like.

https://dreamscapedomain.blogspot.ca/

Take care! :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Reprobate420]
    #23947444 - 12/21/16 09:35 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

that is how i write too, most often. sometimes i'll literally write things down and arrange it later, and mostly it's always from the same stream of thought, generally, other wise i just write it off, and save it for later (the line or whatever).

that works too.
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Thank you, kind sir... and I agree that it can definitely be improved upon and expanded.... it was written in haste... sometimes i just get the urge to write something for the sake of it lol :mushroom2:





i think the best is the other way, but i don't sit down often and write out a poem like a story or anything...mostly if the dedicate some time to it it'll be a generative burst, but depending on that it might just be generally fanned out through a bit for some time, i might come back and tweak it a bit (daammn);--- though the best way is through a long sustained effort of writing a genuine narrative into more extended burst;----- if you wish you can contract the lines into a waveform like through soundwaves man;-- you can breath in with words in your hand and formation occurs, and you can breath out a mountain which you can also, if you can combine all these efforts & accordance's in place, trace an epic poem leading out into of sweet nothingness.

the sloughing effort.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
    #23949725 - 12/22/16 05:36 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Quote:

akira_akuma said:
that is how i write too, most often. sometimes i'll literally write things down and arrange it later, and mostly it's always from the same stream of thought, generally, other wise i just write it off, and save it for later (the line or whatever).

that works too.
Quote:

Reprobate420 said:
Thank you, kind sir... and I agree that it can definitely be improved upon and expanded.... it was written in haste... sometimes i just get the urge to write something for the sake of it lol :mushroom2:





i think the best is the other way, but i don't sit down often and write out a poem like a story or anything...mostly if the dedicate some time to it it'll be a generative burst, but depending on that it might just be generally fanned out through a bit for some time, i might come back and tweak it a bit (daammn);--- though the best way is through a long sustained effort of writing a genuine narrative into more extended burst;----- if you wish you can contract the lines into a waveform like through soundwaves man;-- you can breath in with words in your hand and formation occurs, and you can breath out a mountain which you can also, if you can combine all these efforts & accordance's in place, trace an epic poem leading out into of sweet nothingness.

the sloughing effort.




What you say really makes a lot of sense to me! Wise words and I will do well to keep it in mind. I need to experiment and evolve to a higher degree. For years I was just writing song lyrics and writing music for some of them on my guitar. Trying to write poetry is different though. :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Reprobate420]
    #23949735 - 12/22/16 05:41 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

it's closest approximation i think, it is machinations; machinations is the essence of poetry. but of the mind and spirit and soul, and other concepts, imagery, stories, ect...anything, you wish.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] * 3
    #23949751 - 12/22/16 05:45 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Everything we are resembles flow.
The terrain of existence over which we glow.
Ripples of interactions, chaotic in form.
Waves on turbulent waters conciousness storm.
On which Philosophical boats sail, laden with spice.
Understanding the river is never the same twice.
The drip of words squeezed from a mountain of thought.
Have to pass through the filter of what we've been taught.
Take away the restrictions by forces unseen.
Come closer to free form being.
Flexible fluid and never fixed.
Changeable reality forever mixed.


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Just a fool on the hill.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 3
    #23950273 - 12/22/16 09:39 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Of The Bend

this cicatrix of mine
is my friend, and one and only
charm...
is this lattice of faces
that is my zen
of the bend
the walls of umbrage
peregrinate to kill & find suppage

'twill mend
i blade like the grass, becoming
vitiation of time...
is the chances that i'm taking
my brain as if it was in a coffin, shaking,
a candle towards the end of which,
ready to consume the bend

canting & playing mad
the milling 'round is getting drab
now the stratagems are flawed outlet media
with the outward goal there's no foregoing gaol
& now there's no good places for the money to go
to feed the poor & pay for homes
socialsociety & crime-dirged streets
professional leaders sucking our teats


Edited by akira_akuma (07/03/17 01:45 PM)


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] * 1
    #23950326 - 12/22/16 09:56 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

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this cicatrix of fear
is my friend, and one and only
charm...
is this lattice of faces
that is my Zen
ofthebend
these walls of noctcaelador umbrage
peregrinate to kill & find suppage

to will the saying to mend
i blade with the grass and becoming
vitiation of time...
is the chances that i'm taking
my brain laying on a coffer shaking
ready to absorb to the end
can't be hardened 'til you turn to lead

canting sad, playing mad
the milling of the corn is getting drab
now the stratagems are flawed outlet media
with an outward goal, there's no foregoing gaol
& now there's good places for the money to go
to feed the poor & pay for homes
socialsociety & crime-dirged streets
professional leaders sucking our teats





That's sick, dude. Very impressive and well written. :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Reprobate420] * 2
    #23950443 - 12/22/16 10:45 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

The word, a word followed, is a seemless trace,
A thought, once met, like a discontinuous face,
But sleep, dream, she'll put us aright, all okay,
Your well, is well lined it pours to night, till day.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 1
    #23950454 - 12/22/16 10:50 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Quote:

pineninja said:
Everything we are resembles flow.
The terrain of existence over which we glow.
Ripples of interactions, chaotic in form.
Waves on turbulent waters conciousness storm.
On which Philosophical boats sail, laden with spice.
Understanding the river is never the same twice.
The drip of words squeezed from a mountain of thought.
Have to pass through the filter of what we've been taught.
Take away the restrictions by forces unseen.
Come closer to free form being.
Flexible fluid and never fixed.
Changeable reality forever mixed.




Über chill  :peace:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Kurt]
    #23951158 - 12/23/16 09:15 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

:thumbup:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn]
    #23952576 - 12/23/16 06:53 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

:mushroom2:


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